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Anhedonic Restraint

You keep slurring your words
with your paper tongue,
easy, Quasimoto
that bell can't be unrung.

Turns out I'm solar-powered
with the gift of gab,
my only problem is
that I can't hail a cab !

But, I'll finish my journey
and come up with my "picks",
the game can't be won
with the usual tricks;

it bothers my heart
to admit defeat,
so, I promise to bounce back
and land on my feet.

You won't know what's hit you
as you try to discern,
whether the day is your friend
or if you easily burn.

But, the end of the puzzle
will justify the "means",
and all of your good intentions
won't equal a hill of beans;

what most likely will happen
after all's said and done,
is you'll have to admit
that you've had a good "run".

So, I'll leave you to your details
and your recycled ways,
may you rise to the occasion
and get out of life's maze.
— docmaverick, May 25, 2010

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years ago

Cool poem, Doc. Effortless

Cool poem, Doc. Effortless rhyming, & loved the whole poem. Actually I was going to write love the last lines but had to amend it. ;-) ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years ago

Good stuff Doc M!

Now go and get everyone to look up ANHEDONIA!!! whatta concept!!! Love how you've explored that ;) Cheers Bonita j