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hobo
hobo
May 25, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

You Touched My Heart

Quietly

softly

you have touched my heart

by being here

even though you are there

I know that circumstance

can hold my feet to the ground

but it cannot keep my spirit

from flying

so look to the sky my friend

I am going to close my eyes

and fly to you

— hobo, May 25, 2010

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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Hobo

Words crafted with softened words of care. Nice one:) Love and glad your back Mona xoxo TIME well spent is TIME well lived
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Hello me wee Hobo

So nice to see you back with such a lovely romantic poem...we missed you. Rosina xena465
lou

lou

16 years 2 months ago

Oh hobo

purely beautiful love lou xx
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Hobo

My favorite lines and thoughts: I know that circumstance can hold my feet to the ground but it cannot keep my spirit from flying so look to the sky my friend I am going to close my eyes and fly to you Reminds me of an out of body experience I once had. Always, Cat

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