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hobo
hobo
May 25, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

You Touched My Heart

Quietly

softly

you have touched my heart

by being here

even though you are there

I know that circumstance

can hold my feet to the ground

but it cannot keep my spirit

from flying

so look to the sky my friend

I am going to close my eyes

and fly to you

— hobo, May 25, 2010

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magics02

16 years ago

Hobo

Words crafted with softened words of care. Nice one:) Love and glad your back Mona xoxo TIME well spent is TIME well lived
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Hello me wee Hobo

So nice to see you back with such a lovely romantic poem...we missed you. Rosina xena465
lou

lou

16 years ago

Oh hobo

purely beautiful love lou xx
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years ago

Dear Hobo

My favorite lines and thoughts: I know that circumstance can hold my feet to the ground but it cannot keep my spirit from flying so look to the sky my friend I am going to close my eyes and fly to you Reminds me of an out of body experience I once had. Always, Cat