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I still am, Dear Jess

I still am, Dear Jess

Arrogant and horribly shallow

My poetry hasn’t improved a wee bit

Not so much as one can really see

And I do,

Still, but rarely listen to anyone

As egoistic I still am,

A horrible man or woman.

Listening to feedback of course

I shall still be.

I don’t know

Who was very unkind to me initially?

And

I still give credit to those who do still read me.

You are entitled to your due share

Of my poetic infatuation

As much as anyone else needs me

 

My growth if any,

Is because friends like you,

Still read me.

 I’m awe stricken

That you care to admire

How I’ve improved

Simply it’s because

I admire thee

For your outright condemnation,

And outstanding unparalleled ability

To call a black spade

A blackest one

As and when one doth see ye

 

But still your admiration 

Has to be held in high esteem

By all those who listen to you,

Including yours truly…

 

We all are for ever learning

That’s known as the learning curve,

‘’Improve or bury one self

In mother earth’’

Is a dictum I learnt from many poets

Like goodness gracious thee.

 

I believe I need to bow

In front of many Neopoets,

Who have greater kindness?

Than I really do know,

Perhaps as much kindness

Jess as have thee…
Cheers to you

My friendliest friend of all…



— loved, May 24, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Well written Loved

You know how to write exactly how you feel and this is good for the soul. Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years ago

thanks

...by now u know me well... rgds
hobo

hobo

16 years ago

my friend

my friend there are two types of people first are the people who look at what is good about someone or someones work and that is what they talk about and then there are people who look at whats wrong with someone or someones work. I always ignore people who look for what is bad. they are bitter about there life and they want to take it out on someone. I have found that it is impossible to pick someone up if you are busy putting them down. take what ever positive comments come and figure out what part they like and forget about the ones who want to try and bring your writing down. I like how this comes from the heart. nice read my friend
loved

loved

16 years ago

grateful

I teach positivity To help erase negativity From sour minds And Hope some day In my words comfort They shall find I have no axe to grind Its uplifting humanity I have in mind Thanks indeed You are very kind
arja

arja

16 years ago

..Wonderful write..

..Wonderful write.. }}}APPLAUSE{{{ you always find the goodness in people, and you are not offended by their critisms... you learn from this crtics and become more than who you are... LOVED! love yah friend... :)