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I still am, Dear Jess
I still am, Dear Jess
Arrogant and horribly shallow
My poetry hasn’t improved a wee bit
Not so much as one can really see
And I do,
Still, but rarely listen to anyone
As egoistic I still am,
A horrible man or woman.
Listening to feedback of course
I shall still be.
I don’t know
Who was very unkind to me initially?
And
I still give credit to those who do still read me.
You are entitled to your due share
Of my poetic infatuation
As much as anyone else needs me
My growth if any,
Is because friends like you,
Still read me.
I’m awe stricken
That you care to admire
How I’ve improved
Simply it’s because
I admire thee
For your outright condemnation,
And outstanding unparalleled ability
To call a black spade
A blackest one
As and when one doth see ye
But still your admiration
Has to be held in high esteem
By all those who listen to you,
Including yours truly…
We all are for ever learning
That’s known as the learning curve,
‘’Improve or bury one self
In mother earth’’
Is a dictum I learnt from many poets
Like goodness gracious thee.
I believe I need to bow
In front of many Neopoets,
Who have greater kindness?
Than I really do know,
Perhaps as much kindness
Jess as have thee…
Cheers to you
My friendliest friend of all…
Critiques
xena465
16 years ago
Well written Loved
loved
16 years ago
thanks
hobo
16 years ago
my friend
loved
16 years ago
grateful
arja
16 years ago
..Wonderful write..