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arja
arja
May 24, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Broken (...the other side of love...)

..I said "I do" in a heart beat the words "for better or for worse in sickness & in health for richer or for poorer" linger.. now haunts me even in my sleep threatening to yield my every struggle for freedom to escape from you no one knows, what happened no one dares, to bare the truth.. ..he said "I love you!" leaving marks all over my body.. blue black crimson red... finally, he left me that's when the rain decided to stay, as I lay numb, naked, face flat on the floor...
— arja, May 24, 2010

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Region, Country: Makati City, Philippines, PHL

Favorite Poets: Unknown poets who reach out and be heard through crafted words, that are pieces of life..

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xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Alone

I married once and he turned out to be a real bad apple and I met many thereafter who left me battered and bruised, mentally and physically. I just hope this is not happening any more. You're worth more than this...trust me I know...so sad. Rosina xena465
arja

arja

16 years 1 month ago

oh My Dear Xena,

...this was just a fragment of my thoughts and my imagination, written and delivered (posted) here in NEO... I never realized it would refresh memories from those who have actually been in this kind of situation.. I believe you are a woman worth loving and I guess the men you have mentioned are too blind to see the real you.. I believe somehow, someone, somewhere...through your most unexpected moment, LOVE will find you... Arja :)
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Gee Arja

Thank you. Memories are just memories. The fact that you wrote this from your imagination just shows what a great writer you are and never be afraid to write about things that bring back bad, good memories to the reader. It’s an art that you definitely possess, and that’s a good thing. Xena
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panaella

16 years 1 month ago

jeez...too close to a reality of mine as well

Memories of a violent second marriage...oh dear....so evocative...sent shivers down my spine. A common occurance with many women....why is domestic violence still happening?...all the suffering in silence...most men have no idea what scars we women carry around with us. Ells x
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

So very true Ells

Sorry that you've also been a victim, but I do know of some men who have been physically and mentally beaten by women too. It’s harder for a man to admit to this than for us women. Male pride...it usually happens to the really nice guys. Xena
arja

arja

16 years 1 month ago

Domestic Violence...is a choice..

..my heart breaks to hear of Domestic Violence, from friends in and out of NEO.. I never realize such fear, never expected others to find that connection through this poem and to find their own voice in admitting that "..I have been through the same situation.." ..honestly, Ells I have NEVER been in this kind of situation..not yet, and I choose not to be.. My highest respect goes to all of you, who have experienced and found your inner voice to stand up and say "Enough!" Domestic Violence is a choice we do, but may never admit.. it is an act in society that we (ladies) permit to happen.. we accept things as they come with no complain because of love...but it is not love, it is the other side of love... Thank you my friend...your courage is one thing that I envy the most. The scars that we carry with us, does not mean we are weak; but it makes us even stronger.. Arja :)
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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Alone -

I read you here and you are not alone. This poem is read from many different man and woman that have been affected from domestic violence. I work with these people every day and I know that only until the victims can walk away from an abusive realtionship such as yours will they begin the healing process. Many years ago woman could not go and get an injunction for this so they wept in fear and silence. Now today they have laws in place for this type of behavior. It is not all woman either any longer, as men also suffer. This poem hits a place with me and I shall pm you with the rest of my thoughts. To all that suffer from this you must seek help and know that this is not a normal relationship any longer. Do not suffer silently, stand up for yourself and seek the help your mind and body so deserves. Do it for YOU and the ones that love you. I can go into a long series of this exact subject and will do so at a later date. Until then, know I care, we all care and there is help out there for all. I am proud of you for speaking out and please continue to do so. Love and Hugs to you dearest of friends here...Mona xoxoxooxox
arja

arja

16 years 1 month ago

Sweet & Thoughtful Ms. Mona,

:) ...If I was in this situation, I'll truly seek your hug and words of comfort... Love people like you! You always see the bright side from what seems to be a dull moment... :) But I was just writing thoughts and constructing from images that pass by my memory...as I grasp words from words that connect and somehow make an impact to me.. I just realized how much more this has brought out from people... Domestic Violence...was never part of my childhood... But it happens... My heart felt Thank You; for being there for people who experience such kind of violence..It's a tough job to make others realize that they are in situations like this; and to make them understand that there is a life after such a nightmare... May you continue your advocacy in helping others find their inner voice... Arja :)
arja

arja

16 years 1 month ago

Eiy Friend!

..thanks for the help in editing, and for adding your touch in the poem..I did took most of your advises, hope you give it another read.. :) ..i'm glad your back here with everyone else..
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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

You do good honey

Don't worry what everyone else notices, if you think it is fine then it shall be so. Have a nice weekend gal Love at ya Mona xoxox
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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Yes thank you

There is a special way to handle these folks that come in my office and I always manage to help them see things a tad different when they leave, I surely tohought this was about you or someone possibly close to you to have had to write this in the way you did. I have some too I need to post on here as time allowd, love out to you lovely lady Mona xxxoox
arja

arja

16 years 1 month ago

..let’s make LOVE here in

..let's make LOVE here in NEO overflow, so hate won't have a place in our hearts..but then again, we wouldn't see life the way we should..Balanced! :) I'm really glad to have met a great person like you here in NEO.. stay in touch Ms. Mona.. Mwah mwah! Arja
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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Yes friend

We must never or will ever stop feelings of others and we all come from different regions of the world, I take pride in all whom I have met here and if I had not pressed this google site that night I would never have gotten to meet any of you. So I feel a certain connection with others of likemindness and even those who differ. I came to the realization many years ago that there with the sun rising and setting is a reason to live and be happy, and share our inner peace with others. Life is not all cherries and chocolate and turmoil may exist but to thrive on love, life, and happiness goes further for the mind to grow and cherish each tender moment we share together.. Your one of my favorite writers here as I have many but some I feel a connection of peace with and serenity when I read their works. I appreciate you too gal, and if we could only have one big party set up somewhere for everyone to actually meet in person that I would love to do. We could call it the Neopoems of Neopoets Gathering. Sounds nice and yes the fun we would have to meet one another. Maybe someday we could do this. you never know. I adore your lily in the picture how white and pure the sight is so nice Thanks for stopping by and much love out to you gal, Arja Mona xoxoxoxo
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

They say

...no man can understand a woman But I always look at things From the opposite angle, And say All women know men Yet they love getting entangled. That’s when my poem What is really sin? Comes in U may have a look If it helps To relieve thee
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hippiepoet69

16 years 1 month ago

Lost for words

Abuse has an impact on everyone involved. It affected me as a child. That might be one reason I never married. When I was 16 I steped in between My father more than once. Once I broke his nose. Once I took a 30-30 Winchester away from him and destroyed it. I have only slaped one girl in my life time. And I regretted it instantly. Someone has to breack the cycle. My Holly has been abused one way or other by every husband or boyfriend. Now can she ever had. Now can she ever trust to give her ALL to me. Can she accept that I truely love her. And that I won't hurt her. Women! know that if he is controling in the begining. Or abuses. It will never get better. Only worse. There is someone out there that will treat you right. Don't sell yourself short. Thanks Alone for writting this. I'm glad it isn't about you. But I hate it hits too close home to, too many. I looked for your poems because I like a comment you left for Jetz. Take Care. huey. Oh! I don't use stars. Your poem was very well written. Sometimes the mechanics of a poem is forgotten when the subject is as powerful as this one.

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