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the good earth

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I want to show you a rice field
and weathered men women and children
planting,
point a finger of recollection
against a spike of wheat in a
golden field against the bluest sky
you have ever seen,
ask you then if the scent of bread baking
in your mother's house
erupts inside your senses,

I want to do these things before
oil covers the earth in sins of our fathers
and the greyness descends with the
cries of a mourning dove

I want to hold you close to my breast,
before our spirits fly.














— Kailashana, May 24, 2010

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ziggy

16 years ago

hi

hi there lol yes its me, I am so long over due a read of yours but to be honest i don`t know how half of ye here get around on everyone , so how are you your pic here interests me is there a story behind it anyway the poem lol, i visited the link you added which adds to the poem a picture you paint with words with ease o i so remember the sent of mam baking in the house it was all so yummy baking smells, ,,,,,,,zigs
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scribbler

16 years ago

earth

wonderful,descriptive poem of anticipated loss.....scribbler
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years ago

Thank you both for reading.

Thank you both for reading. Rice and wheat. Rain and sun, earth and sky. Memories. Touch. The staples of life and its eventual ending. ~ "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta