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CAN I BE ONE STEPPING STONE FOR YOU

 CAN I BE ONE STEPPING STONE FOR YOU



If I can be a stepping stone, just one, 

for you to step to happiness begun,

if I could be the sun and show you on the way, 

this thought would make me glad I met you on this day.

 

if I could be the singing birds to soothe you when in pain, 

if I could be the rushing streams that gather all the rain,

if I could be the arcs of rainbows lighting up your sky, 

if I could be the smiling face that soaks up lack of joy,

 

If I could be the tiny things that give you solace now, 

then I am queen of all the world somehow. 





 
— Nordic cloud, May 24, 2010

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Geezer

Geezer

16 years 2 months ago

Truly...

You are the Queen! Your words bring joy to my countenance The face I wear each day Thoughts like spears, you pierce my heart With the the love you say Your love of nature and the people here, are magnified a hundred times by the greatness of your heart. ~ Sir Gee
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Yes that you are

Dear Ann of Norway, very romantic...love it very much...wish I was a queen who could meet my king. Rosina xena465
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 2 months ago

Rosina YOU ARE A QUEEN

Ann of Norway A very special QUEEN too, no other queen is like you, you guide your pen as if it were your subjects, you spread understanding as you are a wise leader of your people, you give us pleasure and insight to the world, and these things make you a queen, so look to her knight's of today, she is ready to employ you with love and compassion, I know it is so. Love to you and good luck guide you dear Rosina from Ann.
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Sweet Ann

Thank you for you lovely kind words x Rosina xena465
mand

mand

16 years 2 months ago

Lovely sentiments Ann. “If

Lovely sentiments Ann. "If I could be the singing birds to sooth you when in pain". Just loved this. Love Mand xxx
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 2 months ago

May all beings be free of

May all beings be free of suffering, and have at least one angel on their side. ;-) ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dearest Ann

may all beings be at peace ... indeed you both leave me speechless love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
M

magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Beautiful

Thank you Snow Lady:) Nice one Love,Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

i stepped on

...your toes perhaps albeit unkowingly I lose friends I know but thats my fate all that know so i take em all in my stride once they were friends Loved...twas u needn't comment ma'am I read u still as u did sometime it will be nice for u to know in Evolution three poems made it as ye did SAY AND WANT it will twill.... twill... twill...

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