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Qnozz
Qnozz
May 24, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

My Dear Chameleon

My Dear Chameleon...    
Sonnet 08
 You are the sweetness to my honeyYou are the sexy to the swing in my hipsYou are the refreshing to my lemonadeYou are the fuzzy to my feelingsYou are the calm before and after the storm You are the bitter and the sweetYou are the trip and the whole journeyYou are the butterflies fluttering in my heartYou are the warmth of my loving hugYou are the depth of my hearts’desires You are heart of the matterYou are a bowl full of juicy cherriesYou are a smooth swirl to my chocolate sundaeYou are the calculated twitch to my every move

 Amen
By: Qnozz
— Qnozz, May 24, 2010

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Country/Region: ZAF

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yenti

yenti

16 years 2 months ago

Qnozz

Can't really comment on structure or makeup of a sonnet, but will look forward to your own work away from tradition as and when it arrives at the tip of your pen. It is really lovely to see so many poets arising from South Africa and the area as I loved to be there in the 80's and part of the 90's. well done with this one anyway,Yours Ian.T

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