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Under the Magnolia Tree

  I buried an angel, on top of the hillUnder the magnolia treeHer wings are long since silentBut she still means the world to me The magnolia's flowers, cover her graveDecorated in majestic whiteShe said the scent was Heaven's perfumeAnd their smell was pure delight I was married to this angel for 41 yearsBefore Heaven called her awayI knew she had to leave this worldEven tho I begged her to stay I know that my loss, is Heaven's gainI guess they were one angel shortI know they wouldn't have taken her Unless it was the last resort Sometimes when I start missing herI can't wait til the magnolias bloomWe can sit and talk for hours While smelling their sweet perfume She said this is as close to HeavenAs anyone could ever beSo I buried her on the hillsideUnder that magnolia tree   
— Whiskurz, May 23, 2010

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magics02

16 years ago

what a write!

The magnolia tree and your loved one. This one had me choked up as I read it. I can see it and I felt it too, What a beautiful write for the scents of magnolias is with you on that hill. I hope you left a copy of this there. This is a great write. I shall return. I also love the magnolias Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

A big WoW

Welcome to Neo...This has me in a pool of tears Whiskurz. Wonderful, beautiful, and so well written in every sense. Rosina xena465