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A Dirge Lullaby
I just couldn't see or bear your plight
while braving a tempest on a fateful night
trying to chasten your devout spirit
to forgive, to soothe, to cheer a life
to greet a birth or grieve in a wreath
a spirit that giveth, never receiveth
beyond a praise, for your beauty's sake
sadly, no one would come, a bee or a butterfly
nor a lark to sing you a dirge lullaby....
So I picked you and brought you home
to save you the chills of wintry storms
laying you gently on a flower bed
beside me by my window pane
where I could watch over you like a bedside clock
watch the bees frolic on your stalks
or a gentle breeze flirting with your charm
each breath of yours I will cherish and keep
till breath would play its part and sleep...
My voice did choke with a pregnant pause
while lifting you with my trembling hands
laying you gently in my prayer book
closer to God, safe and sound
where a tempest won't harm your weathered form
now lying secure in a sacred calm
raj (sublime_ocean)...
Critiques
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Ocean
raj
16 years 2 months ago
Mona..
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Ode to a Flower
raj
16 years 2 months ago
yes Mona
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Raj
raj
16 years 2 months ago
JayCee
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Lovely write Raj
raj
16 years 2 months ago
Rosina
mand
16 years 2 months ago
you have a wonderful way
raj
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you Mand for your
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