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A Dirge Lullaby
I just couldn't see or bear your plight
while braving a tempest on a fateful night
trying to chasten your devout spirit
to forgive, to soothe, to cheer a life
to greet a birth or grieve in a wreath
a spirit that giveth, never receiveth
beyond a praise, for your beauty's sake
sadly, no one would come, a bee or a butterfly
nor a lark to sing you a dirge lullaby....
So I picked you and brought you home
to save you the chills of wintry storms
laying you gently on a flower bed
beside me by my window pane
where I could watch over you like a bedside clock
watch the bees frolic on your stalks
or a gentle breeze flirting with your charm
each breath of yours I will cherish and keep
till breath would play its part and sleep...
My voice did choke with a pregnant pause
while lifting you with my trembling hands
laying you gently in my prayer book
closer to God, safe and sound
where a tempest won't harm your weathered form
now lying secure in a sacred calm
raj (sublime_ocean)...
Critiques
magics02
16 years ago
Ocean
raj
16 years ago
Mona..
magics02
16 years ago
Ode to a Flower
raj
16 years ago
yes Mona
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Raj
raj
16 years ago
JayCee
xena465
16 years ago
Lovely write Raj
raj
16 years ago
Rosina
mand
16 years ago
you have a wonderful way
raj
16 years ago
Thank you Mand for your