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Russian Moll.

Mascara smudged eyes,
And hollow sighs,
Layer by layer revealed for the easy floozy she is,
Slipping another wad of notes into her wrinkled cleavage. 

Wirey, bleached hair,
Clumps of cheap extensions,
Monuments to a better time,
Now it's all bargain rags and yet another fine.

She dreamt of being rich,
Making the big time,
Like all her heroines,
Instead she fell into the mire of hopelessness,
A never-ending trap of desperation,
Never able to escape.
— sharon-rose, May 23, 2010

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years ago

I’m surprised no one

I'm surprised no one commented on this poem. A masterful word portrait. ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years ago

And I can offer no great

And I can offer no great suggestions. The last stanza being quite different from the first two. *An endless trap of desperation from which she never escaped.* For the last two lines, perhaps? Does *instead* need to be included as it is a *given*? ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta