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Either drippings spill or dripping spills would smooth this out a bit Wo Richard this is one of your best. Chrys

Whoa! A rant a la Moonman! I needed my fix. ;-) ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta

Powerful...the anger is raw and honest... good imagery...great use of language! Enjoyed!

that you're not dead... like so many other gods. Written with a little humour, and a good dose of piss. ~ Is that what it takes to get you to write? There are many other things that should get your hat up. Hope to see of them. ~ Gee

...all a dream, but in fact it is a living nightmare. You really don't hold back with your recent writes. You have an anger in there and it is spilling out across the page...may your pen of blood never run out my friend. Great ending: I do not accept man’s behavoir toward his brother I do not walk with you. Fuck me, let me sleep, maybe it’s a dream. We odd English folk would put a 'U' in behaviour. I would also add a question mark to the two lines in the second from last stanza. I understand this piece immensely and believe it is my favourite poem of the week. I know you've been busy but it is good to see my old friend dancing across the forum again. Great write! HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

This is why your one of my favourites you tell it like it is without the frills and bullshit then sock it to us ... brilliant write ... love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

Pretentious people have a lot more to prove. Good write.

God damn, this is GOOD. nominated. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race