Brash

thanks for leaving me this thoughtful comment I had been leaving distance unsure and am glad you bridged the distance for all my brashness I am so caught in how others think of me I at the core like all are good the superflous attributes greatly agrevated by time pain hurts upheavals there is a bad to me but I fight to keep the good the simple there is something decent of this its not easy I am sorry for my spelling errors I know they distract like flies on filet mignon and yet are they not natural my bumps and warts my imperfections I have said I leave these to make me more fitting in but I do have the laze thank you I will try to correct them my one true bane of many I read you you know fascinated at your proud bearing How you thrust yourself at the leading edge Poetess So glad you have come here to leave a comment Esker~

she exists in Ontario Art College one day in first year foundation I was staying on Avenue road in a third story victorian with freinds Robinsons Residences were managing the property good people all anyway Petra was this beautiful red head from high school who was accepted there and we talked in the cafeteria at McCaul Street Toronto and she did ask me for lunch one day and I was so new then so timid and shy then I should have gone with her and Henry with his Jazz muscian freinds Henrys father then was Manager of the federal prisons of canada actual his name now I recall was James M. anyway Petra was beautiful she was something and still is wherever she is Im just sad I wasnt man enough to go with her that day I still think of it

how I cherish correction How are we to become better poets without our fellows helping us thank you my freind You impress me with knowledge of the spoken word I in a hurry to put this to print hamner words on my keyboard and then here we are discussing where I erred thank you my diligent freind You with Keen eye for detail and I tell you detail I love and yet I am so rushed to just put output that I say To hell with accuracy and yet is it not accuracy that is an art I am so happy that you caught this that I can write this so true you are I am happy that you care to comment here critique thank you thank you from Esker