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Soul Awkward Signals

She silently entered the room with a rush
and our eyes met stoically, however tenuously,

shooting looks that meant something else
to the untrained eye within the shadows.

Her lips parted ever so slightly,
silently burning my skin with her insistent caresses,

while her perfume performed
a battery inside my nasal membranes,

and I was rendered slightly unconscious,
with the remnants of my heart within her hand.

After a while the air returned to the room,
I retrieved my hat, and I fled

to a place that exists only for me,
a haven where solace waits for me, by the words, on the pillars.
— docmaverick, May 21, 2010

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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raskin

16 years ago

Such a delicate way you

Such a delicate way you write, Doc. Lovely poem on those moments of awkwardness of what to do. Always a pleasure to read what you write. raskin
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years ago

Raskin....

...that seemed how one would might try to hansle such an awkwardness. Delicately. I sincerely thank you for your comment. Thank-you sooo much. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
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Antoinette Mar…

16 years ago

Dear Son of mine....

I actually saw no awkwardness in this beautiful descriptive write...enjoyed it very much... Antoinette Mari
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years ago

Antoinette....

...the awkwardness was in the moment"...not in the "write". However, maybe ALL was awkward, nes pa? "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.