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OL' BUDDY

My old friend is back again
  reminding me each day
  of how careless I have been
  in youth now gone away

He has been around so long
  when he 's gone, it feels just wrong
  his presence here by day and night
  somehow seems just,  and even right

I'm reminded of the times when I
  thought hurt was just for others
  and was destined to pass me by
  for sons of other mothers

Each time he calls and I respond
  with grimace,limp, or frown
  driving home how often I
  have let my body down

So now I'll pass remaining years
  come sun, or snow, or rain
  for ever in the company of
  my old companion, pain
 


 
— scribbler, May 20, 2010

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Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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Grassfield

16 years ago

Pain

I could certainly identify! I like your laid back style...refreshing...relaxing read! Enjoyed!
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scribbler

16 years ago

ol' buddy

First, welcome to the nut house! Sounds like you've had a few bumps yourself.Glad you liked it.I try to avoid complicated themes or lines.I"ll be reading you....scribbler
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years ago

I rejoice in how I have abused my body!

I have live a hundred years in 50 So I accept the consequenes. Strangely I am still well, strong and healthy, must be the elven blood. So it goes, I am sorry you are suffering the consequences, what can I say but a well written poem. Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible, "the alleged short-cut to knowledge, which is faith, is only a short-circuit destroying the mind." [Ayn Rand, Atlas Shrugged]
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scribbler

16 years ago

buddy

I guess I missed the mark.Meant to be mostly about the recklessness of youth gone by.thanks for reading and kind comment.....Stan
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

I like it Stan

A little different from your usual, but still great. Rosina xena465
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scribbler

16 years ago

buddy

I try to stretch once in a while.Glad you liked this attempt....Stan