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raj
May 20, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Void

Not a blade of grass
to soothe my wounds
Not a drop of dew
to shed the woes
Silken rays
have stolen all charm
of what was once
our dawn...

raj (sublime_ocean)
— raj, May 20, 2010

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Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Lovely Raj

Really lovely...so much said in so little word...superb. Rosina xena465
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Just right for tonite

And what a peaceful place you write of. Bravo ocean Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived
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raj

16 years 2 months ago

Mona..

so good to know that you felt the essence of the write..thank you Mona for your inspiring message.. warmly...raj (sublime_ocean)
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poewriter58

16 years 2 months ago

Raj

What little there isd of this poem is excellent. You have a talent for using the right words. My only regret is that it isn't longer Chrys
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raj

16 years 2 months ago

Hello Chrys…thank you for

Hello Chrys... thank you for your time to visit my poem and appreciation...for a long time i wanted to try a short one...this was my first attempt at that...besides the theme in itself was "short loved".... warmly ...raj (sublime_ocean)....

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