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Let Me Return

 

From stilted quick speech confined to city,

voices colliding  in too close a dance,

to the friendly coo-ee of vibrant countryside,

deep echo resounding  through wide open expanse.

 

From frozen detached brick and phlegmatic concrete

with surreal hum that starves the soul,

to vibrant murals of ever-changing landscapes

as seasons give birth to their respective goals.

 

From dried odours of thousands of compacted bodies

swept on swift feet in one-visioned rush,

to intense scents, bouquets, ambrosia

of multispectral trees and wildflowers of the bush.

 

From cold sinuous rays of streaky skulking yellow

creeping through dark and cluttered streets,

to fire slowly spreading, then the ignition spark

as Apollo explodes above indigo peaks.

 

From few, constrained, faint, twinkling speckles

struggling for notice in neon-lit sky,

to a crowd of sparkling diamonds and gems set

in a giant jewelled serpent snaking over high.

 

From sameness and crowding and dim light so false,

dawdling, drowning, in fast urban growth,

take me out to the sun-browned country,

let me return to the beauty of the world of my youth.

 

— judyanne, May 20, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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Critiques

xena465

xena465

16 years ago

WoW Wee Judy!

This is fab. I need my dictionary for some of the words, but I get the beauty of this lovey write. Rosina xena465
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

thank you so much rosina

for your very supportive comment love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
SH

shirley harrison

16 years ago

Judy

some how you just hit me in the heart with your poetry its spectacular! Much love Judy shirley harrison
M

magics02

16 years ago

Great one

ANd yes I want to return to those days too, Lovely imagery you portray here with this write. Love,Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

magics!!!!

thank you love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
mand

mand

16 years ago

I’m working on a poem that

I'm working on a poem that is similar in substance. I felt the longing in your poem and I long with you. For me this is your best poem yet. Love Mand xxx
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

thanks mand

glad you liked it love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
loved

loved

16 years ago

Please do apply your gr8888est mind

Please do apply your gr8888est mind And Errors, as well as some goodness In my compositions find And To improve them also do remind Plddddooo Keep me in your mind… loved www.triond.com lovelyhoney
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

hi loved

thanks for visiting i'll be along to see you soon, i'm very busy at the moment and have just popped in this evening to catch up on a few of you guys love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years ago

Dear Judy

You always write with such grace and beauty. I stand in awe... Love, Cat
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

what a lovely thing to say cat

especially since i stand in awe of your writes... love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
hobo

hobo

16 years ago

nice read

nice read my friend, I love to close my eyes and go back to my youth
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

hi randy

thank you so much nothing more sweet than the days of youth looked back on in older age eh? love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Judd

really smooth read lovely poem hun bravo love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

hi jc

thanks and hugs at you love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Judd

I was remiss to add .. this one reminded me of a time long ago .. when the world was a kinder place .. weird i know but yeah you took me back I just wanted you to know your words reached across that big ass desert love ya JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
R

raj

16 years ago

Dear Judy

your poetry flows so very well that it transitions easily from the material world one visions in adulthood to the simple and youthfull exuberance...the yearning for that could be felt in these closing lines.. take me out to the sun-browned country, let me return to the beauty of the world of my youth. warmly...raj (sublime_ocean)...
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

thanks raj

for the supportive and confidence-building comment love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
S

scribbler

16 years ago

return

Would that we could return to world of our youth.Liked best of your writes I've read so far......scribbler
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

thanks scribbler

so glad you liked it thanks for visiting love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html