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Let Me Return
From stilted quick speech confined to city,
voices colliding in too close a dance,
to the friendly coo-ee of vibrant countryside,
deep echo resounding through wide open expanse.
From frozen detached brick and phlegmatic concrete
with surreal hum that starves the soul,
to vibrant murals of ever-changing landscapes
as seasons give birth to their respective goals.
From dried odours of thousands of compacted bodies
swept on swift feet in one-visioned rush,
to intense scents, bouquets, ambrosia
of multispectral trees and wildflowers of the bush.
From cold sinuous rays of streaky skulking yellow
creeping through dark and cluttered streets,
to fire slowly spreading, then the ignition spark
as Apollo explodes above indigo peaks.
From few, constrained, faint, twinkling speckles
struggling for notice in neon-lit sky,
to a crowd of sparkling diamonds and gems set
in a giant jewelled serpent snaking over high.
From sameness and crowding and dim light so false,
dawdling, drowning, in fast urban growth,
take me out to the sun-browned country,
let me return to the beauty of the world of my youth.
Critiques
xena465
16 years ago
WoW Wee Judy!
judyanne
16 years ago
thank you so much rosina
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16 years ago
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shirley harrison
16 years ago
Judy
magics02
16 years ago
Great one
judyanne
16 years ago
magics!!!!
mand
16 years ago
I’m working on a poem that
judyanne
16 years ago
thanks mand
loved
16 years ago
Please do apply your gr8888est mind
judyanne
16 years ago
hi loved
Candlewitch
16 years ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
16 years ago
what a lovely thing to say cat
hobo
16 years ago
nice read
judyanne
16 years ago
hi randy
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Judd
judyanne
16 years ago
hi jc
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Judd
raj
16 years ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
16 years ago
thanks raj
scribbler
16 years ago
return
judyanne
16 years ago
thanks scribbler