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May 20, 2010
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Light as a Feather
the silence pressed
at the windows
and every touch
was fleeting
anger lived
in a blooded heart
as forgiveness
troubled thoughts
all it took ?
was one finger
a loose bra strap
and one tear
I am such a push over
— Seren, May 20, 2010
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CyberSpace
16 years 2 months ago
thank god you are a pushover
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
dont you be too cocky boyo
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
i am so still laughing
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Judd
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Licia
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
He, he, JayCee
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Rosina
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
Apparently no one needs a
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dearest Mum
pleiades
16 years 2 months ago
love it! so concise, so
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear P
pleiades
16 years 2 months ago
don’t fret for one
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear P
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