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May 20, 2010
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Light as a Feather
the silence pressed
at the windows
and every touch
was fleeting
anger lived
in a blooded heart
as forgiveness
troubled thoughts
all it took ?
was one finger
a loose bra strap
and one tear
I am such a push over
— Seren, May 20, 2010
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Critiques
CyberSpace
16 years ago
thank god you are a pushover
Seren
16 years ago
dont you be too cocky boyo
judyanne
16 years ago
i am so still laughing
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Judd
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Licia
xena465
16 years ago
He, he, JayCee
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Rosina
Kailashana
16 years ago
Apparently no one needs a
Seren
16 years ago
Dearest Mum
pleiades
16 years ago
love it! so concise, so
Seren
16 years ago
Dear P
pleiades
16 years ago
don’t fret for one
Seren
16 years ago
Dear P