The love lust insane

On a knife edge of stolen momentYour infidelity a blasphemyOf your church sworn vowsMy willingnessMy downfall Forgive me for my needsFor I cannot forgive myself No touch no intimacyNo hungry looks in iris black depths Forgive me Aloof replaces passionBut still it snakes a passing flameLicking the alabaster skinFuel to freshly buried desiresSingeing…BurningThe pleasure of painNumbing the brainAll the same toThe love lust insane

— seabhac, May 20, 2010

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Seren

16 years ago

Dearest Liz

I dont want to say what I think this ones about its way too personal ... but this is brilliantly written there is a palable lust and wanting threading its way all through it ... the giving in,to the lust the burning and going up in flames knowing you shouldnt love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

seabhac

16 years ago

Enough to know I know you know Jayne

Learned a lot in the articulation of the emotion for this one. Fire burns but also cleanses Thanks Jayne Seabhac

Candlewitch

16 years ago

Hello

I have to agree with Jayne on all points. I greatly enjoyed this piece. Always, Cat

judyanne

16 years ago

been there, done that

didn't like it came home didn't buy the tee-shirt great write seabhac love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

ziggy

16 years ago

hi

hi there i have to say i do like this one and maybe written from the heart many great lines within this piece good write bravo ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,zigs