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Smiling Springs Content

 Open your eyes 
to the light that shines

birds above on perch

be the seed
or fruit thats needed

A love that can be held

stand tall a bright horizon 
to those who bend at knee

they hold in  mind
a pleasured thought

that each one surly values

as the face of one
holds hope for others

a strength that carries on

a simple dream secretes to all
barren seeds envisioned 

secured our dreams
no hate to be related

 the castle of  dream
always has to have

a true and loyal subject

as it is on life's stage
 day's may bring  sunshine

or  darkened this cloud

Tears lost from people
or smiling springs content.


— mantiscepter, May 19, 2010

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Seren

16 years ago

Dear John

Ive just sat and read this three times and I dont know what to say but that its sadly wistful my friend ... thats all I can think of sorry not more profound love and big hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
M

mantiscepter

16 years ago

Springs Content

I guess I'm in a spiral, of mixed thoughts. I might be looking in too many directions at one time. Thanks for your time to stop and read and critic the writing. Love always John.