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May 19, 2010
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HUNTER'S LUCK
I guess I had no luck today
no antlered monarch came my way
to make breath catch and heartbeat pound
my prey was nowhere to be found
My vigil started 'fore sunrise
and ended with dark ,starry skies
embedded in fall woods' embrace
not moving from my vantage place
I got to see the break of dawn
and saw the forest come awake
I saw the dusky curtain drawn
all as if for my own sake
Up in the air ,so way up high
a pair of hawks danced in the sky
they uttered out a high-pitched screech
so far beyond my yearning reach
As my eyes returned to ground
a scruffy coyote came around
and as he turned his gaze toward me
I didn't move, he didn't see
Throughout the day I saw the flocks
of geese and doves and turkeys pass
and even saw a few woodcocks
who launched themselves from marshy grass
I think I may have even dozed
until a distant truck door closed
to awaken me in time
to watch the evening sun's decline
The things you see and hear alone
while in the woods far from a phone
are never glimpsed by hurried faces
while going through their hectic paces
And as the sun set behind me
'twas nowhere else I'd rather be
than in this lonesome, distant place
surrounded by creation's grace
I guess I had no luck today
I'm glad that it turned out that way
no antlered monarch came my way
to make breath catch and heartbeat pound
my prey was nowhere to be found
My vigil started 'fore sunrise
and ended with dark ,starry skies
embedded in fall woods' embrace
not moving from my vantage place
I got to see the break of dawn
and saw the forest come awake
I saw the dusky curtain drawn
all as if for my own sake
Up in the air ,so way up high
a pair of hawks danced in the sky
they uttered out a high-pitched screech
so far beyond my yearning reach
As my eyes returned to ground
a scruffy coyote came around
and as he turned his gaze toward me
I didn't move, he didn't see
Throughout the day I saw the flocks
of geese and doves and turkeys pass
and even saw a few woodcocks
who launched themselves from marshy grass
I think I may have even dozed
until a distant truck door closed
to awaken me in time
to watch the evening sun's decline
The things you see and hear alone
while in the woods far from a phone
are never glimpsed by hurried faces
while going through their hectic paces
And as the sun set behind me
'twas nowhere else I'd rather be
than in this lonesome, distant place
surrounded by creation's grace
I guess I had no luck today
I'm glad that it turned out that way
— scribbler, May 19, 2010
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Critiques
scribbler
16 years ago
hunter
xena465
16 years ago
Brilliant Stan
scribbler
16 years ago
spacing
xena465
16 years ago
Yes Stan
scribbler
16 years ago
spacing
xena465
16 years ago
Dear Stan