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ANCIENT ARISEN

ANCIENT ARISEN

Ancient arisen yet only two quarters into life,
soul with fire i will not fall to the dark this night.
Go gentle at the close of this day
for an old arisen man, leads with the light,
Two quaters and the knowing, born from dust
with ease,
to return spellbound if i must.

 

— reepa, May 19, 2010

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Region, Country: Eastern cape, South Africa, ZAF

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years ago

Hello Reepa...

This is a beautiful spellbinding poem... I love every single word... Exquisite work. Gentle regards, Raven-Shakti
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reepa

16 years ago

Thank you very much, i will

Thank you very much, i will be uploading a new version soon. i liked the thought so much i thought i would add to it.
Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years ago

Hi Reepa...

I'm so glad there will be more! You are on my Buddy list now. I will be looking for you... Gentle regards, Raven-Shakti