Screw

As you squash me, a flower,

Crush the butt under your shoe,

I feel the screw…

— loved, May 19, 2010

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Critiques

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Loved

I'm not sure what it means, but I'm guessing it's to do with someone being crushed by a nasty person? If this is the case, well done…if I got it wrong, sorry, but I quite like my thoughts on it anyway. Rosina xena465

shirley harrison

16 years 2 months ago

This is really interesting!

Helloooooo LOVVVEEEEDDDDD iiiiitsssss mmeeeeeeeee I like this little poem is it a cigarette? please reveal mooooooooorrrreeeee Muuuuchhhh loooovvveeee shirl! shirley harison

loved

16 years 2 months ago

keep guessing

u will not be able to guess unless you apply ur sixth sense. let more read it before i say what i meant

Kailashana

16 years 2 months ago

The turn of the screw is but

The turn of the screw is but a footstep away, the violet leaves her scent on the foot that crushed it. ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta

loved

16 years 2 months ago

somewhere nearer

nice interpretation things will get clearer you r so far the best interpretter

shirley harrison

16 years 2 months ago

loved i wonder?

Is it the last nail in the coffin? oh god i hope im wrong!!!!! i do have a sixth sence actually in many ways i should share really! shirley harrison

loved

16 years 2 months ago

no no no

sorry ur far off think of life and its ultimate purpose of satisfaction that should be a clue especially 4 u

shirley harrison

16 years 2 months ago

making love "screw"

Ok i love these brain teesers L:O:L glad i was wrong up above! shirley harrison

loved

16 years 2 months ago

ur

... the most wonderfull one one who has a common mind and many others in ur lead should an answer now find but hold one my explanation is still of a different kind let as many read it then the quiz muster will come and give of/off ones mind gr8888888888est so far also there is one such one in the blogs as poetry is only one perday pl do solve that too i know u will