loved

May 19, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Screw

As you squash me, a flower,

Crush the butt under your shoe,

I feel the screw…

— loved, May 19, 2010

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xena465

16 years ago

Dear Loved

I'm not sure what it means, but I'm guessing it's to do with someone being crushed by a nasty person? If this is the case, well done…if I got it wrong, sorry, but I quite like my thoughts on it anyway. Rosina xena465

shirley harrison

16 years ago

This is really interesting!

Helloooooo LOVVVEEEEDDDDD iiiiitsssss mmeeeeeeeee I like this little poem is it a cigarette? please reveal mooooooooorrrreeeee Muuuuchhhh loooovvveeee shirl! shirley harison

loved

16 years ago

keep guessing

u will not be able to guess unless you apply ur sixth sense. let more read it before i say what i meant

Kailashana

16 years ago

The turn of the screw is but

The turn of the screw is but a footstep away, the violet leaves her scent on the foot that crushed it. ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta

loved

16 years ago

somewhere nearer

nice interpretation things will get clearer you r so far the best interpretter

shirley harrison

16 years ago

loved i wonder?

Is it the last nail in the coffin? oh god i hope im wrong!!!!! i do have a sixth sence actually in many ways i should share really! shirley harrison

loved

16 years ago

no no no

sorry ur far off think of life and its ultimate purpose of satisfaction that should be a clue especially 4 u

shirley harrison

16 years ago

making love "screw"

Ok i love these brain teesers L:O:L glad i was wrong up above! shirley harrison

loved

16 years ago

ur

... the most wonderfull one one who has a common mind and many others in ur lead should an answer now find but hold one my explanation is still of a different kind let as many read it then the quiz muster will come and give of/off ones mind gr8888888888est so far also there is one such one in the blogs as poetry is only one perday pl do solve that too i know u will

lou

16 years ago

Re

re; the screw animal , veg, or mineral? or a squishy friut lol lol

loved

16 years ago

LOL DON'T YET PLEASE DO READ OTHERS VIEWS U WILL COME NEARER TO

THE SOLUTION OF WHAT WE ALL SCREW SCREW SCREW SCREW

lou

16 years ago

LOL SCREW

Is it that you are screwed? or that are we are all screwed boo hoo ? lol lou x