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I just want to say this had me so transfixed ? it took me half the poem to realise that it was rhyming ... bravo I really loved this one and sorry I cannot find fault nominated love and hugs Jayne-Chloe ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

i so have read it before and thought i'd commented. anyway - nominated. brilliant write mand love and hugs judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

Just beautiful poetry I am in love with this! Well done Mand, i can see the sun now! Much love always shirley harrison

Mand, imo you could be making a lot of money with your poetry, design your own set of cards (do you have a photographer, artist friend?) to send to folks for/on any/every occasion either hard-copy or net click& email form. This is after all 2010 and except for the strictly inspirational, and humourous ones, there's really nothing for those who look for something good and off-the-beaten-track. This is not a put-down, it's an honest critique given by a poet who has been published in many venues, but has never made much *money* in that endeavor, as most poets except for the rare great ones such as Bukowski, Angelou and the ever-high-profile performance artists. Your poetry has already proven to appeal to the masses (a cross-section here at Neopoet). ~Anna "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta

very nice write, I really like the lines I’ll tell the moon to blow you a kiss To lull you to sleep in heavenly bliss.

I'm sure I comment on this one. So I'll just comment again. You would make a good creater of a new world. Your visions are wonderful. Rosina xena465

much has already been said which is richly deserved for these beautifull verses...i will only add a line... i could see the riverbed in these crystal clear reflections ... warmly...raj (sublime_ocean)..

Mand, You tell it with grace and humility. Lisa

Mand this is grand and I just love how you ended it up. A great write from a woman who thinks and writes from a soulful pen and mind. Just loved it here today. Worth a anomination indeed maybe two of them Love Mona xxoxoxo TIME well spent is TIME well lived

Ann of Norway They will now, wow, this is beautifully shining its dazzle like the fragmented surfaces of diamonds forever bright dear mand well done here absolutely lovely. Ann.XX......not Anna. As Anna is Anna.