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...pain...

…the wind has uttered its final silenceleaving beyond its dormant flowwhere your pain has spilled its angerreckoning each passing dayaltering its very existence… …freedom was givenyet taken away before it escapessuccumbing each moment into obscurityas such this emptiness is filled to the brima disappointing act which is unforgiven… …the long wait has endedbegging to be releasedfrom the abyss of sleepeach beginning is as numb as yesterdayonly to find out its place somewhere beyond…
— arja, May 18, 2010

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Region, Country: Makati City, Philippines, PHL

Favorite Poets: Unknown poets who reach out and be heard through crafted words, that are pieces of life..

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Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years ago

This is a very sad write

are you okay my friend? I miss talking to you. but, that's okay. What's wrong? I love this poem the emotions you put into it. I'll checkin with you later. Stay strong with all my irish luck going your way Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to
arja

arja

16 years ago

hi Alana!

...just writing from thoughts...more like scribbling...inspired from a word I've read somewhere here in NEO...I was clinging to that word "PAIN"...then I started writing and ended up with this... Thanks for having the time to read and feeling the sadness out of it... Do take care...