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May 18, 2010
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a few delicate minutes
don't fall in love with a poet
he said,
which didn't help her
at all.
she'd looked into
his eyes
heard
his junk-yard dog howl,
had his spinal touch
reach
her fractured nerves...
and a few delicate minutes
was all it took.
.
— pleiades, May 18, 2010
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pleiades
16 years 2 months ago
e…you move me
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
I think I read another piece
pleiades
16 years 2 months ago
yes, there is another piece
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
we me cant be pricks
pleiades
16 years 2 months ago
we me can’t be
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
du'up
Esker
16 years 2 months ago
Waypoint to waypoint
pleiades
16 years 2 months ago
e…i would find it so
Esker
16 years 2 months ago
have we met..........
pleiades
16 years 2 months ago
we make our own now, yet
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
So sweet pleiades
pleiades
16 years 2 months ago
thank you mona, for
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
…. :-) ….~A“Just as
pleiades
16 years 2 months ago
thanks for visiting Acheers p
Grassfield
16 years 2 months ago
poets
pleiades
16 years 2 months ago
so glad you enjoyed thank
loved
16 years 2 months ago
lovely poetry
pleiades
16 years 2 months ago
great comments loved, and
raj
16 years 2 months ago
it is said that “the best
pleiades
16 years 2 months ago
thankyou raj…i’m glad
Esker
16 years 2 months ago
delicate merge
odd molly
16 years 2 months ago
Dearest PI love your
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