loved

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Birth Of a Poet

Birth Of a Poet

That you appreciate

Is an honour for you…

Very few can cherish

Other’s victory…

My heart goes out to you

Who ever you are

Where ever you maybe

Let love smear you
ENTIRELY

Yes Perhaps I was born

I was born
As a matter of fact
on a lonely sojourn
and
that’s how a poet,
A natural one,
I was born
But never felt forlorn…

Also I was perhaps born

In the darkest

Of the middle of

A darkened night

But surely twas

Not last nite.

Now from this site
I shall soon
perhaps
be gone….

Your poetry is exquisite;
it makes my heart palpitate
when I read all your poems
I hesitate,

To pen my thoughts
perhaps these are my last.

The heart felt good wishes for all those who read my poetry
and
also commented upon my works.

I am actually a born poet .

This year and a half past I have composed 2700 poems

You all are welcome to read them at
www.triond.com
Lovely Honey

THANK YOU AND GOOD BYE FOR SOME WHILE

— loved, May 17, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Critiques

xena465

16 years ago

Hey Loved?

What's this all about? You're not leaving us!!! Rosina xena465

Shango007

16 years ago

That’s what darknlovely

That's what darknlovely was talking about! lol... very well, take your leave...

shirley harrison

16 years ago

Beautiful poem but very sad!

You are so well respected by me as one. I would be really sad to not read your day today poetry any more loved! I can see why you might not want to be here anymore but thats all the more reason to stay and write. "with me" shirley harrison

chumfin

16 years ago

greatwork.

A FEELING IN YOU is not willing to make you go away.stay we still have to learn from the wealth of poerty in you. you are needed here too. i love this piece Now from this site I shall soon perhaps be gone….

barbsdad2003

16 years ago

You share ...

enticing bits and pieces here and there, but choose, apparently, to remain pretty much a mystery. Wish you'd give this site a little more time. My personal time is limited to library hours ... and only some of them. Feels like your piece here is directed at me. Maybe, maybe not. Don't know. Would like to see your submissions hold more clarity. I'm frustrated a bit (usually) by simply not knowing/understanding what it is you try to convey. I love/like clarity, I love/like simplicity, I love/like connection. All areas we (all of us), I think, can find improvement. The opportunity is here. It's on you whether you wish to take advantage ... or perhaps just walk away. The sadness comes in the walking away you do ... from yourself, if I may chance to be so blunt. So, in short, give us a chance, give me a chance, give yourself a chance. And don't feel bad if I don't visit very often. Nothing personal. Nothing about you. It's about me and how I choose to spend my time/effort. Nothing complicated. It's that simple. Regards, Chuck

loved

16 years ago

i just happened

I just happened to pass this way.... the poem has not been directed... at or on any one in particular. but my vocabulary is limited ...I have to go to some library and drink words divine.... wherein solace I can find .... I shall not yet pass away... there's still some more time ... the clock ticks slowly but does so surely we all know it as much as you do I too don’t want to stay on with you.... LOVED SHALL RETURN TO CONVERT THIS piece INTO POETRY THERE IS SOME ONE AT THE DOOR HOPE THE ONE IS AN ANGEL LIKE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU ALLL

loved

16 years ago

poetification of my clarification

I just happened To pass this way, The poem has not been directed At or on any one, But my vocabulary is limited I have to go to some library To consume words divine Wherein solace I can define I shall not yet pass away There’s still some more time… The clock ticks slowly But does so surely… We all know as much As you do I too don’t want to go Away from you LOVED

Marie-I-Be

16 years ago

loved

You changed don't want to stay on with you to don't want to go away from you. I think you want to express your conflicted thoughts. I think you want to stay and you want people to ask you to stay. Someone who has had enough of this place and would like to leave could simply leave without announcement; but you have put out a plea for attention. I hope things clear up for you and you can decide what you really want ... and I hope you will focus on writing for yourself more than for anyone else (which would likely thereby improve your public writing).

loved

16 years ago

for sure

..healthy advice well taken thanks BUT I SHALL stay as u now say only one way is to improve my words play stay stay stay i will stay