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May 17, 2010
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Looking for a Clue
hanging on to your wordsreading between the linesthis is getting absurdgoing out of my mind looking for a cluejust a little hintwhat I mean to youall the time, spent on tales of days gone bywhere we have beenand the reasons whythere was no us, back then those reason no longer existwe are now both freewe no longer, have to resistwhatever may come to be cards held close to your chestI can't see your handI can't even guesswhere I fit into your plan So I'll hold onto your wordsread between the linesquestion everything I've heardat least twenty times copyright 5-16-10 huey horton (hippiepoet69)
— hippiepoet69, May 17, 2010
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Critiques
Alice Ember
16 years ago
ohhh, Huey
hippiepoet69
16 years ago
Thanks Alice
xena465
16 years ago
Nice one Huey
hippiepoet69
16 years ago
Thanks Zena
scribbler
16 years ago
clue
hippiepoet69
16 years ago
thanks Stan
hobo
16 years ago
wow
hippiepoet69
16 years ago
Thanks hobo