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Looking for a Clue

 hanging on to your wordsreading between the linesthis is getting absurdgoing out of my mind looking for a cluejust a little hintwhat I mean to youall the time, spent on tales of days gone bywhere we have beenand the reasons whythere was no us, back then those reason no longer existwe are now both freewe no longer, have to resistwhatever may come to be cards held close to your chestI can't see your handI can't even guesswhere I fit into your plan So I'll hold onto your wordsread between the linesquestion everything I've heardat least twenty times copyright   5-16-10   huey horton   (hippiepoet69)      
— hippiepoet69, May 17, 2010

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Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years ago

ohhh, Huey

This is so sad. I hope your okay. Don't read to hard you might catch teh wrong meaning With all my irish luck going your way Alice Cowards aren't the only ones who die a thousand deaths. Sometimes heroes do to
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hippiepoet69

16 years ago

Thanks Alice

Some of what she says still gives me hope. I can't get in a hurry now. I've waited 28 years just to get back to where I am now. As always I await her call to wake me up tonight. And hopefully she will only hear my smile. Thanks for reading and commenting. May your Irish eyes always smile. Take Care.
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Nice one Huey

You're all heart and more. Rosina xena465
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hippiepoet69

16 years ago

Thanks Zena

All heart and no brain when it comes to love. She is the only one my heart can over ride my brain for. But hurt can over ride my heart. Thanks Zena for reading and being an ear for me. Take Care. huey
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scribbler

16 years ago

clue

what a wonderful,hopeful write on longing for another chance.......Stan
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hippiepoet69

16 years ago

thanks Stan

It still looks good for us. But I'm just going to let it set it's own pace. I think we both tried to rush it. She backed off. So I did too. I have 30 years of emotions tied up in her. And so she. Thanks for your wonderful comment. Take Care. huey
hobo

hobo

16 years ago

wow

Wow this is beautiful my friend, I can feel your heart in each and every word. great read
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hippiepoet69

16 years ago

Thanks hobo

putting my heart into it easy. Try to make my thoughts work as a poem can rack my brain. You and other poets inspire me to improve. Thanks for reading and commenting. Take Care. huey