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May 17, 2010
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She Touched My Private Parts
She knew me
She hadn't met me
But she knew me
She could read my words
And see in my soul
She saw things in me
That I didn't even see
Made me see things
I was trying to hide
Down deep inside
She said things
That made me dream
She opened my eyes
And my heart
Reached into my soul
And touched private parts
My friends I am gone so much but when I get back to my pc I will try and get caught up on my commenting. I can't wait to read your wonderful work. forgive me
hobo
She hadn't met me
But she knew me
She could read my words
And see in my soul
She saw things in me
That I didn't even see
Made me see things
I was trying to hide
Down deep inside
She said things
That made me dream
She opened my eyes
And my heart
Reached into my soul
And touched private parts
My friends I am gone so much but when I get back to my pc I will try and get caught up on my commenting. I can't wait to read your wonderful work. forgive me
hobo
— hobo, May 17, 2010
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lou
16 years ago
I love this
lou
15 years 11 months ago
Read it again......
shirley harrison
16 years ago
Hobo The Great!
xena465
16 years ago
You Devil Hobo!
scribbler
16 years ago
touched
loved
16 years ago
we all touch
hippiepoet69
16 years ago
I love the missleading title