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She Touched My Private Parts

She knew me
She hadn't met me
But she knew me

She could read my words
And see in my soul
She saw things in me
That I didn't even see
Made me see things
I was trying to hide
Down deep inside

She said things
That made me dream
She opened my eyes
And my heart
Reached into my soul
And touched private parts

My friends I am gone so much but when I get back to my pc I will try and get caught up on my commenting. I can't wait to read your wonderful work. forgive me

hobo
— hobo, May 17, 2010

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lou

lou

16 years ago

I love this

Hobo this is a fantastic poem , a deep view on how we as human beings can be effected by another. Great read Lou
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shirley harrison

16 years ago

Hobo The Great!

Hobo a fantastic poem of your soul you are a really special man! Much love to you! shirley harrison
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

You Devil Hobo!

When I read the title I thought, "Oh no"! I expected an X-rated poem, but it was lovely...you're all heart. Rosina xena465
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scribbler

16 years ago

touched

This can only happen when we open ourselves to love.Good,short write....Stan
loved

loved

16 years ago

we all touch

....but u touch differently thats the only difference bewteen you and me you touch anyone but pardon me