Kailashana

May 17, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

like Gods, dreaming

i planted a seed
of You
inside the fertile soil
of my mind
You became rooted
deep into my heart
and i grew wings

I encircle the world now
joined
like wave to sea
like sky to earth
like love

we are Avatars here,
like gods we fly,
dreaming.....

— Kailashana, May 17, 2010

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theladyblue

16 years ago

Anna...

This is really beautiful and simple. As much as I love the simplicity of it I still feel like I want more out of it. Maybe its just because I love your language usage here I cant really tell...it just seems unfinished. <3 Emarie "i read you and see…that between the pen, paper and you…there is little room for me…" ~ heart breaker~ Go Live & Get Rewarded!!! Check us out at http://www.neopoet.com/forum/20761 & the Community Calender!!!

Kailashana

16 years ago

Dreams….are our dreams

Dreams....are our dreams ever *finished*? And so it is that we each write our endings and have not ending that we can write of. Thanks for reading Emarie. ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta

theladyblue

16 years ago

Always a pleasure Anna...

I hope you awake happy :) <3 Emarie "i read you and see…that between the pen, paper and you…there is little room for me…" ~ heart breaker~ Go Live & Get Rewarded!!! Check us out at http://www.neopoet.com/forum/20761 & the Community Calender!!!

Seren

16 years ago

Dearest Mum

If a heart could sing for a poem mine would have for this one ... there is something so simple in its message that goes deep for me ... sorry had a rough bitch of a day love to you darlin hope you are loving each other love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

Kailashana

16 years ago

My Dear J-C. Perhaps in

My Dear J-C. Perhaps in reponse to Emarie... it goes beyond Barry and I, love extends to you and yours, his and hers and theirs; us and them, our world and the universe. In this we are Oneness, personified. ~ "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta

Lonnie

16 years ago

Simply Breathtaking!

You have proven once again that your muse is hard at work and decisively driven! This is a very readable poem that will undoubtedly linger in many a memory!

Kailashana

16 years ago

It will? We’ll

It will? We'll see.... Thanks for reading and your kind remarks, Lonnie. ~ "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta

Lenny of Cohen

16 years ago

I thoroughly

enjoyed reading this excellently crafted poem. Love, Light and Laughter to All Beings Namaste, Lenny

Kailashana

16 years ago

Namaste, Lenny.May all

Namaste, Lenny. May all beings be free from suffering. ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta

pleiades

16 years ago

is the uneven use of

is the uneven use of capitals in "i" and "You" in the first two stanzas deliberate? i have no problem with it as is, i'm just curious... this is beautiful A... simple...feeling...evocative all the hallmark greeting poems there are, cannot compete with eloquent, thoughtful words. cheers p

Kailashana

16 years ago

Yes. In love one melts into

Yes. In love one melts into the *other*... the i is You. ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta