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I Said A Prayer


I said a prayer for you and me
for the world and all to see
Here is written a spoken word
what is lost, must be heard

I said a prayer for the parents today,
of all the children who've lost their way
Teach them lessons of right and wrong
begin early on, raise them strong

I said a prayer for the foundation of family
once where morals and values now gone
What has been lost must be regained
for the sake of the children, spare them pain

I said a prayer for you and me
for the world and all to see
Let us pray for the children today
Also for the parents who have lost their way

I said a prayer for you and me
I prayed to God, the Almighty
Children who have gone astray
Teach and guide them along their way

Do not deter them to unknown ways
Raise them up in all your days
Teach them goodness in all of life
Lend them a hand, lessen the strife

I said a prayer for you and me
for our world and all to see
Here is written a spoken word
What is lost, must be heard


 

mms 5.17.10

— magics02, May 16, 2010

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magics02

16 years ago

words of wisdom

Sometimes go unsaid to our children. Sometimes the kids get all messed up for some parents do not know what to do. I am going to be a volunteer for the Help A Parent In Need and I will get a family who is struggling on these same issues to see if I can offer some suggests. The lady called me back today and I told her yes I would do it. We need more people to offer up their time and talents to those less fortunate. I am so thankful I had the knowledge to coach my son from years of experience and also from the role model of my parents and my grandparents which I am forever so grateful for as they taught me alot. Have a great week Annie and don't work too hard. Love,Mona xoxox TIME well spent is TIME well lived
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scribbler

16 years ago

prayer

Inspiration to act as better role models and mentors.Read so much like western classic it felt as if in line 16 maybe "lessen the strife"? In line 12 didn't you mean "spare them pain"?I may just be missinterpreting due to my classic bias. Your friend and student:scribbler
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magics02

16 years ago

Scribe

I thank you for notated those lines and yes thank you for the read and made the changes you suggested. You are not missinterpreting just helping out the writer for this I am thankful. And yes we must be better role models and mentors for the children growing up today in a society much different then when we were raised. thank you for taking the time for the read and the suggests friend. Keep it coming Love,Mona xoxoxo TIME well spent is TIME well lived
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magics02

16 years ago

What do you mean

Annie I did not quite get this last comment "leave a bad taste in my mouth and then why not to be bad person" Please explain, This is one I did about the plights of many of our children today. Love,Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived
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magics02

16 years ago

I understand

And respect your feelings also Love,Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived
Shango007

Shango007

16 years ago

I often wonder what’s

I often wonder what's wrong with the world today, and if there ever existed a time when it wasn't in trouble... but I guess we can only do our best and hope to receive the fruit of our labors. I felt this one.
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magics02

16 years ago

Thank you for the visit

We can only hold up hope for the children of today, and prayers, yes Mand Will be by soon to see you Love,Mona xoxoxo TIME well spent is TIME well lived
hobo

hobo

16 years ago

thank you

I don't know about anyone else but I can always use prayer, very nice prayer my friend
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Dear Mona

I think it's wonderful that you want to help others...your words are an insparation to us all...great write. Rosina xena465
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years ago

"Train up a child

in the way he should go and when he grows old he shall not depart from it"PROVERBS 22:6 Excellent poem Mona - both in thought and execution! Regards Boni
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shirley harrison

16 years ago

a poem of love!

its as gooder thing as any to believe in and may everyone live a loving peaceful honest life without hurt jealousy and crime! I send my love to each and every one of you on this page! shirley harrison
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Mona

Another lovely poem from you well done :) love and hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")