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Silent Paean

the lean verticle time narrows
windows of stained glass beneath
the transfixed lightning,
blue and momentary. A smile of starving
crystal lost in a glass,
eye . Puritan walls contain
bronze memories, this museum of marbled sky
polishing the fetid wood in the bones of chairs
beneath the parady of curtains breathing
a coffin in the statues of air,
cracking with the last church bell
my hymn.


























— Orphani, May 16, 2010

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years ago

No one can touch you in the

No one can touch you in the art of metaphors, so delicious and light like the fingers with which you touch me, inciting my mind, inflaming my heart and soul, making me to burn with desire. I hear church bells my love. ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta
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ziggy

16 years ago

hi

hi i love the opening lines to this paints a picture in my mind , great write ..o.........zigs gets a nom for sure ,,,,,,,,,,,