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May 15, 2010
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Feces Occureth
Alone and naked among the dead,
crawling through charnel tunnels
beneath an eldritch Churchyard
and breathing fumes of putrefication,
here am I
While human, I prayed for immortality,
beseeching each and every Deity
for the privilege of eternal life,
and now, praying for release,
here am I
Worlds are born, Galaxies die,
omnipotent chaos cackles incoherently
while dissolving into primal ooze,
and slithering through this viscous slime,
here am I
Gods devour this flesh
then defecate it back into existence
ultimate humiliation without end
and trying to form it into verse,
here am I
C. Lon R. Bruso
crawling through charnel tunnels
beneath an eldritch Churchyard
and breathing fumes of putrefication,
here am I
While human, I prayed for immortality,
beseeching each and every Deity
for the privilege of eternal life,
and now, praying for release,
here am I
Worlds are born, Galaxies die,
omnipotent chaos cackles incoherently
while dissolving into primal ooze,
and slithering through this viscous slime,
here am I
Gods devour this flesh
then defecate it back into existence
ultimate humiliation without end
and trying to form it into verse,
here am I
C. Lon R. Bruso
— Lonnie, May 15, 2010
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Lonnie...
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Lon
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