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Fairytales and Lotteries...

Fairytales and Lotteries…

Who was it that decided we’d be the ones, without choice,
hard working people with a mouth, but no real voice.
From every type of industry, workbench, or office seat,
none of us has the right to life until the jobs complete.
 
In America and Russia, to the place of the Rising sun,
across all other countries the work must get done.
But one thing that never differs since modern time began,
people of wealth and privilege, abuse their fellow man.

They talk of social justice and all that it should entail,
but as the words leave their mouths, they act to make it fail.
Centuries of struggle written down but never heeded,
when will they ever learn, social change is needed.

We know man has many faults, some are easy to forgive,
this is one that must be checked, so all can say they’ve lived.
To deny your fellow man equality, after all we bleed the same,
is downright unforgivable, and our social justice is to blame.

Top heavy with wigged warriors of the wickedly wealthy,
they loyally keep order and say what for us is healthy.
Using their courts as squalled money collection stations,
keeping a boot at our throats in the name great nations.

People of the planet must realise, lives are the true capital,
money and wealth a mere totem manufactured as an idol.
We must step forward as one, and demand real equality,
giving all, from ghetto, or stately home, the right to be free.

Everyone is an asset and has a different strength,
we must not waste time searching for this at length.
But gathering and using our assets with creative care,
 we may find a fairytale or lottery, of which we are, unaware.
— Roscoe Lane, May 15, 2010

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Region, Country: Scotland, Ayrshire land of Burns.., GBR

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Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Roscoe

wow ... life is more precious than most people can imagine ... its not till you get a limit on that life? that its smacks home exactly how precious and valuable it really is ... bravo love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

16 years ago

Thank you,

I have just read your new poem, and in reading your work. It just means what you have written here, is even more greatly and humbly appreciated. Love Roscoe...
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

You said it all so well

Very well written Roscoe and so true. Did you mean [none] is this line?....{non} of us has the right to life until the jobs complete. Rosina xena465
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scribbler

16 years ago

fairytails

loved subject choice and rhyme.I doubt many people at life's end think"I wish I'd spent more time at work."Form of poem confuses me as I would have listed it as western classic.Guess I'll never understand free form.It seems the timing may stumble at a few places(or is this just me trying to interpret in classic?)I.e.second verse:is "the" needed prior to "rising sun"and"other countries"? Stan
Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

16 years ago

I'm not sure

about form, i just write and see where it takes me. Removed the "the" from other coutries line, thank you for your comments. Regards Roscoe..