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May 14, 2010
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the sleep of Lovers
I watched you sleep
last night
a Moon-God
breathing
a storm came,
you awakened--
smiled the smile
of shattered marble skies
embracing me with cornflower eyes
lovers, we bring rainbows
and light candles in each other's dreams,
the scent of Lobelia
pressed
into a page.
last night
a Moon-God
breathing
a storm came,
you awakened--
smiled the smile
of shattered marble skies
embracing me with cornflower eyes
lovers, we bring rainbows
and light candles in each other's dreams,
the scent of Lobelia
pressed
into a page.
— Kailashana, May 14, 2010
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loved
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lovely
hobo
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beautiful my friend
weirdelf
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ah yes, ah yes,
seabhac
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I wanted it to go on
Seren
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Dearest Mum
Nordic cloud
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My little pressed lobelia.
club special
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Last stanza
lou
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Wow
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