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WRITES ITSELF

 WRITES ITSELF

I don't sit down to write,

it sits down itself, 

wherever I am, in the bus, in a tram, on the loo,

my pen is busy,

my mind flows with thoughts,

immediate or seen in a flash, 

sparked by other thoughts,

or seeing a person, a thing,

That is interesting to me,

possibly not in the least bit interesting to anybody else.

 

Unless perhaps I clothe it in a new dress

and in doing so awaken thoughts

around something from a different view,

renew the observational powers

of you, and help you too to create your own little exhibition

of the art of thought; 

which, we must admit is creative, inspirational,

and keeps us going in the otherwise all too often, 

mundane drudge of the treadmill of life,

earning money, satisfying others, meeting deadlines, busy.

 

Just hop sideways,

to reinvent our own existence,

again and again, 

giving it the perception of its whole, 

its meaning and the feeling of being alive, 

and taking part in the mechanisms of human life

on earth.



 




— Nordic cloud, May 14, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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anonymous1

16 years ago

Oh Wow!

This is marvelous poetry. It puts me in mind of my own mother standing at the kitchen sink looking out the window across the street as people came and went from the grocery and she had a story for each and every one of them. I especially like these lines: Just hop sideways, to reinvent our own existence, again and again I'm glad to have met you through your lovely poem. Thank you, Lisa
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Ann

I have some small suggestions for this one but will leave them for tomorrow ... tonight I am just enjoying reading your lovely words ... thanks for sharing tham as always my friend ... loved these lines Unless perhaps I clothe it in a new dress and in doing so awaken thoughts around something from a different view, renew the observational powers will catch up on all the writes ive missed over the next few days ... lovely to be back huni love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
loved

loved

16 years ago

I was born

I was born As a matter of fact on a lonely sojourn And That’s how a poet, A natural one , I was born But never felt forlorn… Now from this site I shall soon be gone. Your poetry is exquisite, It makes my heart palpitate When I read your poems I hesitate, To pen my thoughts Perhaps these are my last.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years ago

You are kind.

Ann of Norway You are well wishing and it is lovely for me to think that my words give you happiness, my greatest wish is to spread that, and I thank you for your praise, and hope that you will continue to write and improve your art, good luck to that always, whoever you are. Ann.
loved

loved

16 years ago

Thanks

....a lonely star so far who ever i am i am ur fan i shall continue to read you wheneveer i can loved here lovelyhoney www.triond.com