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Darkened Illusion
Darkened Illusion
From the darkness
From the darkness of a twisted mind
someone tries to solace find
In the woods of a solitary sojourn
Of ones lonely life,
He looks towards others
As a solace against ones own wife
And
Yet merges with in her soul
To satisfy his lustful urge
As one whole
When he doesn’t satisfy his goal
He looks towards a corrupted console
perhaps that makes him one complete soul
oh what a darkened mind has he
Out of this vast wilderness
He seems to have found me
An anonymous person
He doesn’t know a boy, a girl,
Or straight ,gay or lesbian or what ever
I could be.
He shall faint once he does manage
To see me
A darkened mind
fom the crevices
Of stolen time
Alas I have sympathy
Thank God
I sent my rep to test him
How lucky was I
Twas not me.
Critiques
raskin
16 years ago
Pretty funny, no one knows
shirley harrison
16 years ago
very wonderful
loved
16 years ago
thanks for the