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Darkened Illusion


Darkened Illusion

From the darkness

 

From the darkness of a twisted mind
someone tries to solace find

 

In the woods of a solitary sojourn

 

Of ones lonely life,

 

He looks towards others

 

As a solace against ones  own wife

 

And

 

Yet merges with in her soul

 

To satisfy his lustful urge

 

As one whole

 

When he doesn’t satisfy his goal

 

 He looks towards a corrupted console
perhaps that makes him one complete soul
oh what a darkened mind has he

 

Out of this vast wilderness

 

He seems to have found me

 

An anonymous person

 

He doesn’t know a boy, a girl,

 

Or straight ,gay or lesbian or what ever

 

I could be.

 

He shall faint once he does manage

 

To see me

 

A darkened mind
fom the crevices

Of stolen time

 

Alas I have sympathy

 

Thank God
I sent my rep to test him

 

How lucky was I

 

Twas not me.

 

 

— loved, May 14, 2010

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shirley harrison

16 years ago

very wonderful

Im here to tell you your poetry is wooooonderfuuuullll Much love loved! shirley harrison
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loved

16 years ago

thanks for the

.....honour.... ur Honour I was expecting a blunderfoooooollllllllll remark thanks