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May 14, 2010
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A Physical Thought
Wandering eyes
that travel in thought
Down spiraling ventures
ending timelessly caught
Attention thats taken
From the sweetness of mind
To realities near tenseness
Breaking thoughts that did rhyme
Only for moments
To catch words that meant
Nothing of importance
For many who have sent
These views to present
Thoughts not inclined
To wake or disturb this
Beauty that's entwined
For bodies our minds
To join close as one
We blend grasp each
Flowing thought
feeling self can be done.
that travel in thought
Down spiraling ventures
ending timelessly caught
Attention thats taken
From the sweetness of mind
To realities near tenseness
Breaking thoughts that did rhyme
Only for moments
To catch words that meant
Nothing of importance
For many who have sent
These views to present
Thoughts not inclined
To wake or disturb this
Beauty that's entwined
For bodies our minds
To join close as one
We blend grasp each
Flowing thought
feeling self can be done.
— mantiscepter, May 14, 2010
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the_fool
16 years ago
great flow
mantiscepter
16 years ago
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