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A Physical Thought

 Wandering eyes
that travel in thought

Down spiraling ventures
ending timelessly caught

Attention thats taken
From the sweetness of mind

To realities near tenseness 
Breaking thoughts that did rhyme

Only for moments
To catch words that meant

Nothing of importance  
For many who have sent

These views to present
Thoughts not inclined

To wake or disturb this
Beauty that's entwined

For bodies our minds
To join close as one

We blend grasp each
Flowing thought


feeling self can be done.


— mantiscepter, May 14, 2010

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the_fool

the_fool

16 years ago

great flow

not bad rhyming either. very lighthearted. liked it very much.
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Thoughts

It's nice to hear your comments to the tune of you liked it. sweet. was one of those fun ones. to write. thanx again.. hope to see ya around the site..... Mantiscepter