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May 12, 2010
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END OF A DAY'S WALK (edited)
It's time I turned my feet for home
whence I've been too long gone
the journey started with first light
and now it's nearly done
The many trails I've walked upon
have all had twists and turns
they've carried me through mid day's heat
and past cool evening's somber ferns
At dawn's first light,my pace was firm
my stride was sure and strong
but as the sun dips 'yond far berm
tired legs don't stride so light and long
And now I think of all the folk
I' ve met along the way
those who've hindered,those who've helped
or tried to lead astray
Although the next hill calls to me
"what's on the other side?"
the light grows dim ,it's hard to see
shadows grow long and wide
It's time I turned my feet for home
to she who's shared this path
so now I walk through twilight's gloom
perhaps I'll hear a far loon's laugh?
whence I've been too long gone
the journey started with first light
and now it's nearly done
The many trails I've walked upon
have all had twists and turns
they've carried me through mid day's heat
and past cool evening's somber ferns
At dawn's first light,my pace was firm
my stride was sure and strong
but as the sun dips 'yond far berm
tired legs don't stride so light and long
And now I think of all the folk
I' ve met along the way
those who've hindered,those who've helped
or tried to lead astray
Although the next hill calls to me
"what's on the other side?"
the light grows dim ,it's hard to see
shadows grow long and wide
It's time I turned my feet for home
to she who's shared this path
so now I walk through twilight's gloom
perhaps I'll hear a far loon's laugh?
— scribbler, May 12, 2010
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timing
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walk and 2012
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