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END OF A DAY'S WALK (edited)

It's time I turned my feet for home
   whence I've been too long gone
  the journey started with first light
  and now it's  nearly done

The many trails I've walked upon
  have all had twists and turns
  they've carried me through mid day's heat
  and past cool evening's somber ferns

At dawn's first light,my pace was firm
  my stride was sure and strong
  but as the sun dips 'yond far berm
  tired legs don't stride so light and long

And now I think of all the folk
  I' ve  met along the way
  those who've hindered,those who've helped
  or tried to lead astray

Although the next hill calls to me
  "what's on the other side?"
  the light grows dim ,it's hard to see
  shadows grow  long and wide

It's time I turned my feet for home
  to she who's shared this path
  so now I walk through twilight's gloom

  perhaps I'll hear a far loon's laugh?
— scribbler, May 12, 2010

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Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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scribbler

16 years ago

timing

Just letting my friends know I won't be submitting on may 13 in order to improve my time slot.I'll still be tracking and checking in and will submit may 14.thanks, Stan
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scribbler

16 years ago

walk

the end of a good walk should leave a person wanting more and wondering what's next
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scribbler

16 years ago

walk and 2012

the end of a good walk should leave a person wanting more and wondering what's next.re:2o12 not sure I've got private messaging down, so I'll reply here also.poem is set in year 2012 as subject recalls lost paradise. thanks, stan
the_fool

the_fool

16 years ago

beautiful

reminds me of simon n garfunkel. just needs a refrain. great write, can't wait to read more. t_f
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scribbler

16 years ago

walk

some of best poetry of last 50 yrs. can be found in form of song.thanks for comparison
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ngaioBeck

16 years ago

Days Walk

All I can say is "Simply Wonderful"A Robert Burns "Ring" to it.
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scribbler

16 years ago

walk

to be mentioned in same sentence with Burns is praise beyond my skill.thanks!
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scribbler

16 years ago

walk

I guess all our lives' trails have twists and turns.Thank you.
SH

shirley harrison

16 years ago

The Journy

wonderful write i love this its possitive and very well written walk through life we end up strong! much love shirley harrison