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jetz
jetz
May 12, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Certainty.........For Patrick

       Certainty


Certainties in this life
  are few

Time
Circumstance
Letters jockeying for position

All try to alter fate

None will succeed

For we, my beloved,
  are a certainty.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZsukB39t6eA

 


 

— jetz, May 12, 2010

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Region, Country: South eastern Connecticut, USA

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 2 months ago

It is a wonder when we find

It is a wonder when we find that special someone. Sublime poetry is written.. As is yours and Patrick's today. Lovely! ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta
jetz

jetz

16 years 2 months ago

Licia, As I have already

Licia, As I have already told you, your response touched me deeply. I am so pleased that you liked this, and for your wonderful way of telling me (us) just how much. The UTUBE clip is one of our favorites and you can obviously see why. Thank you again, my friend. Sue

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