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May 12, 2010
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Memory
I used to think there was plenty of time
but the clock ticked surreptitiously
and my universe changed in an instant.
And like stars that blast themselves into oblivion
in their relentless search for sustenance
I subject myself to it
every now and then.
I listen to the music
and in my mind I am again
sitting on the cold hard pew
at his funeral.
I weep.
The waters cleanse.
— judyanne, May 12, 2010
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anonymous1
16 years 2 months ago
Unimaginable
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thank you lisa
raskin
16 years 2 months ago
Well said poem on loss,
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks raskin
raskin
16 years 2 months ago
Yes, that’s the one. He
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
now you've brought tears to my eyes raskin
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
I have no words so I offer a
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
anna xxx
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
lovely licia
panaella
16 years 2 months ago
sad
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thank you ellie
shirley harrison
16 years 2 months ago
sadly beautiful!
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
so sorry shirley
shirley harrison
16 years 2 months ago
I lost my 25 year old brother
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
they never leave us shirley
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Judy
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
magic mona !!!
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
Brilliant Judy
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
so sorry to have made you tear up
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
I second the hug Anna gave you dear judyanne from annanya
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
look up annanya
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dearest Judd
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks jc
loved
16 years 2 months ago
i saw
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks loved
loved
16 years 2 months ago
My comments
esperanza
16 years 1 month ago
very touching
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
hi esperanza
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
we always think we have
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
hi scribbler
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