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May 11, 2010
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GULF COAST 2012
I used to come out here to hook
a flounder,white fish,even snook
back when the beaches were so white
and salty marshes showed no blight
The breeze was fresh and smelled of sea
I thought that's how it'd always be
but now what scents I chance to smell
on still days, make me feel unwell
The flocks of birds which darkened skies
and filled it with their raucous cries
have been replaced by random crows
that oversee where nothing grows
I once saw fleets of shrimping boats
beyond where used to be sea oats
and all the tourists ,tanned and oiled
avoid this once pure sand ,now soiled
The marshes that once formed a foil
to salt intrusion; dead from oil
who knows how long before it's right
and not portray this awful sight
I remember how it was back then
before the spring ,two thousand ten
a flounder,white fish,even snook
back when the beaches were so white
and salty marshes showed no blight
The breeze was fresh and smelled of sea
I thought that's how it'd always be
but now what scents I chance to smell
on still days, make me feel unwell
The flocks of birds which darkened skies
and filled it with their raucous cries
have been replaced by random crows
that oversee where nothing grows
I once saw fleets of shrimping boats
beyond where used to be sea oats
and all the tourists ,tanned and oiled
avoid this once pure sand ,now soiled
The marshes that once formed a foil
to salt intrusion; dead from oil
who knows how long before it's right
and not portray this awful sight
I remember how it was back then
before the spring ,two thousand ten
— scribbler, May 11, 2010
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magics02
16 years ago
Great
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16 years ago
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magics02
16 years ago
Yes are you on the gulf coast?
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Superb Scribbler
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wow
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gold fingers
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Two Thumbs up
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