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GULF COAST 2012

I used to come out here to hook
  a flounder,white fish,even snook
  back when the beaches were so white
  and salty marshes showed no blight

The breeze was fresh and smelled of sea
  I thought that's how it'd always be
  but now what scents I chance to smell
  on still days, make me feel unwell

The flocks of birds which darkened skies
  and filled it with their raucous cries
  have been replaced by random crows
  that oversee where nothing grows

I once saw fleets of shrimping boats
  beyond where used to be sea oats
  and all the tourists ,tanned and oiled
  avoid this once pure sand ,now soiled

The marshes that once formed a foil
  to salt intrusion;  dead from oil
  who knows how long before it's right
  and not portray this awful sight

I remember how it was back then
   before the spring ,two thousand ten
— scribbler, May 11, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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magics02

16 years ago

Great

I share this poem with you and it is very well written scribbler, I allready see the damage it has done and yes how our pristine beaches will turn dark and sickening along with all the beautiful sealife..sad really sad this happenstance. This is a great write of yours Bravo Love,Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived
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scribbler

16 years ago

gulf

Thanks Mona.When I want to feel a sense of awe or tranquility,I skip brick and mortar church and immerse myself directly in creation.As pristine and wild places die,so does a little bit of all of us.
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scribbler

16 years ago

gulf

No. I'm in northern South Carolina.Can't you tell by my accent,I'm a child of the South?ha!ha! Don't have to be there to feel the pain
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Superb Scribbler

It's a great subject to cover and you did it well. I love the flow. It kept me interested from start to finish. Rosina xena465
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scribbler

16 years ago

gulf

thanks Rosina.First poem I ever wrote about a contemporary event,but some pains demand a response
SH

shirley harrison

16 years ago

wow

How lovely was this! Beautiful and your name should be Gold Fingers not scribbler! Beautiful work. Their are many things once beautiful have faded and ruined with time! Much love shirley harrison
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scribbler

16 years ago

nomination

don't know what you're nominating me for(dog catcher?)but ,thank you for the kind words
H

hippiepoet69

16 years ago

Two Thumbs up

I'm pissed and can't wait to vote come November. Our lawmakers are asleep at the wheel. I'm in North Louisianna. But we will feel the financial impact of this. As will all American will for years to come. Let clean house come November. Thanks Stan for a poem well written and on target. Take Care. huey
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scribbler

16 years ago

gulf

I agree about cleaning house.I am tired of complaining about the old crowd;I want a new crowd to complain about.Don't think founders meant for politicians to go to Washington and stay for ever.End of rant.thanks for reading poem...Stan