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Seemingly so very true

 

Seemingly  So Very True

I write for you all

Those who love to read

And

Make me a friend after it…

Thanks to all

Who make my day

And poetry I shall continue

To compose  today

 

Love is in my hearts for all

I shall some day be

A veritable part after all

Loved once is my poetic name

All love me that’s what

The loveliest game

— loved, May 11, 2010

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shirley harrison

16 years ago

LOved i love you!

But your really wierd! Weird weeerd very unique! shirley harrison
loved

loved

16 years ago

Weird as weird can be

My reply is the same as is for Rosi......... the same as is for everyone i thank thee i thank thee i thank thee
loved

loved

16 years ago

Reply Is

...the same as is for everyone i thank thee i thank thee i thank thee
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Me lov u 2 Loved

Five stars for a nice write to us Loved. Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years ago

One day

... some day u will make a star out of me and in the heavens i shall all day and nite long will be winking at thee thanks for the love u give friends of Neopoets to me...........
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years ago

loved, this is a wonderful site, as you know

but it has a trap, writng your poems for Neopoet takes away from their universality. Think about this, it is important. Write for everyone, not just us, Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible, "the alleged short-cut to knowledge, which is faith, is only a short-circuit destroying the mind." [Ayn Rand, Atlas Shrugged]
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years ago

oh no! not stop writing!

I, and others, have found that when we spend a lot of time on Neopoet we found ourselves writing for Neopoet. I was merely suggesting this is a problem others have found. Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible, "the alleged short-cut to knowledge, which is faith, is only a short-circuit destroying the mind." [Ayn Rand, Atlas Shrugged]