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May 11, 2010
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like a moth, like another spiral
do you see how the frond dances
in the gentle wind, baring its green light softly
between the tender bosom of sharp rock,
there on the climb uphill, tall
thin pines guarding lost memories? did
you wake up in the valley of the edelweiss when
the truth was walled and the narcissus stayed inside? did
you see the forest burning in my eyes? did
your heart allow you to be drained bleeding to
be alive in the sand, the desert of your hours that
formed the pathway to the stars your feet of gold, you
a statue or a slave to kings and queens, gods? did
you love me even then? I paint my lips with the blushing
youth of my longing, I plait my hair with the silvering moon
lingering on my shoulders I surrender to the translucent
dawn of our perfection, I am drawn to you, you
hover over me, spirits touching and music spilling
from your fingers, playing the melody of me, I am
silently drawn to you and you steal from me
my every breath. like a moth inside a spiral, temptation
breaks our soul in two. intermezzo tango raw blood,
bold, rich and blue, afire.
in the gentle wind, baring its green light softly
between the tender bosom of sharp rock,
there on the climb uphill, tall
thin pines guarding lost memories? did
you wake up in the valley of the edelweiss when
the truth was walled and the narcissus stayed inside? did
you see the forest burning in my eyes? did
your heart allow you to be drained bleeding to
be alive in the sand, the desert of your hours that
formed the pathway to the stars your feet of gold, you
a statue or a slave to kings and queens, gods? did
you love me even then? I paint my lips with the blushing
youth of my longing, I plait my hair with the silvering moon
lingering on my shoulders I surrender to the translucent
dawn of our perfection, I am drawn to you, you
hover over me, spirits touching and music spilling
from your fingers, playing the melody of me, I am
silently drawn to you and you steal from me
my every breath. like a moth inside a spiral, temptation
breaks our soul in two. intermezzo tango raw blood,
bold, rich and blue, afire.
— Kailashana, May 11, 2010
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Critiques
raskin
16 years 1 month ago
This one is real good,
judyanne
16 years ago
beautifully said as usual anna
loved
16 years ago
very beautiful
Dalton
16 years ago
there is no comment i could
Kailashana
16 years ago
Thank you all for
club special
16 years ago
Good God