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Light to Dawn

 Resting beside a hearth of fire
the pleasures it brings 
to your hearts desires

a comforting warmth 
for two to share
in a poetry of visions
that lights the air

moving as starbursts
that float to the top
in arrangements so many
changed with each pop

soothing these feelings
it's hard to explain
like a journey thru time
down memory lane

eyes closed gently  
a mind wanders on
now the end of evening
has changed to dawn
— mantiscepter, May 11, 2010

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xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Nice...very nice

Lovely words and flow Mantiscepter. Rosina xena465
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Love Dawn

Hi xena465, and I thank you for stopping and reading this poem. so glad you liked it. nice to talk to you again, and hope to see you soon. Mantiscepter
loved

loved

16 years ago

The Transformation

Such polite and soothing thoughts Can come to a mind sublime As yours. As nite gradually turns to dawn A new babe is born The sunrise does it show, Where were you The son does seemingly say When I was born On that morn...
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Light to dawn

Hi love I'm John Nice to meet you. Happy to hear you had a nice read, and seemed to like where it went. I just like words and how whimsically they blend, not only in our minds, but how transcended themes are attached by their own entities. one could say evolved. I just have a lot of fun. thanx again. Mantiscepter
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magics02

16 years ago

You go Manti

Wow your just on the roll and much improvements made, Great rhyming and timing..loved it again Magnifico Love,Mona xoxox TIME well spent is TIME well lived
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

Light to Dawn.

Hey Mona How are you. thanks for all these great words and love. happy to hear all was ok with this write. we are here to please. so have a wonderful evening, and we will speak soon, Love John Mantiscepter