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May 11, 2010
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Light to Dawn
Resting beside a hearth of fire
the pleasures it brings
to your hearts desires
a comforting warmth
for two to share
in a poetry of visions
that lights the air
moving as starbursts
that float to the top
in arrangements so many
changed with each pop
soothing these feelings
it's hard to explain
like a journey thru time
down memory lane
eyes closed gently
a mind wanders on
now the end of evening
has changed to dawn
the pleasures it brings
to your hearts desires
a comforting warmth
for two to share
in a poetry of visions
that lights the air
moving as starbursts
that float to the top
in arrangements so many
changed with each pop
soothing these feelings
it's hard to explain
like a journey thru time
down memory lane
eyes closed gently
a mind wanders on
now the end of evening
has changed to dawn
— mantiscepter, May 11, 2010
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Critiques
xena465
16 years ago
Nice...very nice
mantiscepter
16 years ago
Love Dawn
loved
16 years ago
The Transformation
mantiscepter
16 years ago
Light to dawn
magics02
16 years ago
You go Manti
mantiscepter
16 years ago
Light to Dawn.