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My Birth Child
My birth child, is who you are
my son, my ever loving star
You are growing up so fast now
I look at you, seeing you once a toddler
your beaming eyes gazing upon me
Once a little son, now you turn to manhood
my eyes blur for a second or two
Is that really you there
My how you've grown, that smile, that hug
the good morning, the good night kisses
My birth child is who you are
my son, my everloving star
My hopes for your future, mom's best wish
I'll always feel this way for you son
Wanting you to be happy
healthy, prosperous
kind, gentle, loving, caring
steadfast. Never to give up
For all your dreams you hold in your heart
Plans of your future of love and peace
What I did for you all these days
from toddler to teen
My birth child from day one to eternity
always know I am here, forever for you
through thick and thin
never go alone or be silenced
into the big world, tread lightly, learn much
Know I will always be here
waiting to talk, mom in her chair
My birth child, is who you are
mms 5.10.10
Critiques
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
birth child
magics02
16 years ago
Yes we do
scribbler
16 years ago
birth child
magics02
16 years ago
Your too funny scribble
scribbler
16 years ago
birth child
magics02
16 years ago
Stan
magics02
16 years ago
Thank you Annie
Alice Ember
16 years ago
I love this Mona
magics02
16 years ago
Thank you ALice
Shango007
16 years ago
Children are a blessing. And
magics02
16 years ago
Yes correct
shirley harrison
16 years ago
What a beauty!
magics02
16 years ago
Thank you honey
xena465
16 years ago
Very touching Mona
magics02
16 years ago
Thank you Rosalina dear
mand
16 years ago
Your a lovely lady Mona, and
magics02
16 years ago
Thank you Mand
judyanne
16 years ago
lovely magic
magics02
16 years ago
Thank you Judy
Candlewitch
16 years ago
Dear Mona
magics02
16 years ago
Thank you Golden
Hooded Stranger
16 years ago
Beautiful
magics02
16 years ago
Yes and thank you so much
ifoundaplace
16 years ago
ahh
magics02
16 years ago
Grazzi Dani
hobo
16 years ago
This is beautiful
magics02
16 years ago
Thank you Hobo