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SPARK OF AN ARGUMENT

 SPARK OF AN ARGUMENT

The sparks that light an argument

are often very small,

just like the start of fires,

where one small candle flame

devours a whole, a house, a wood,

 

and out of all proportion to the cause

that tiny spark of conflict,

like fire with anger fed, with wind, 

with air that unseen element,

and when its done and over,

 

we regret we ever even mentioned it, 

or set it with a light that

picked out deeper hidden thoughts, 

like spread of mould and blight,

and there it lies for ever more, 

 

engraved and etched, a blackened char, 

of dissonance and malcontent, 

of scarred beauty, fallen pride, 

and lost is all we coveted and held

so close inside, and just because

 

we started out with so small a gesture,

when studied, understood, it stands

a true conjecture, and relent

its ever happening, apologise, made small,

but out there in the woods, the plants

beneath the sod, they are not dead, 

they grow again as if forgiven by a god.

 


— Nordic cloud, May 10, 2010

About This Poem

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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judyanne

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

very true annanya

we do so have to be careful of what we say burnt relationships don't grow back as strongly as burnt forests. love to you judyanne xxx
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

I agree with Judy

A small disagreement can cause so much hurt and regret if it's allowed to grow and fester. Life is too short to lose good friends over silly arguments...I love it Ann...so honest and true...just like you. Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years ago

Norway produces.....

....ma'ams with Exquisite capacity For creative poetry I dare to read all SILENTLY… And comment some SCAREDLY… WAS LOVED ONCE NOW NO MORE......