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Lepadah
Lepadah
May 10, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Electric City Lackawanna Drive

burned through Electric City down Lackawanna sky bursting true blue heaven billiards God's cue stick shooting pockets for sunshine breaking full clouds while you play air piano on the steering wheel driving hard to follow monk fist in my crotch waiting to kiss the crown liquid jewel flow production creme in between sticky panties floating to ohio players "Sweet Sticky Thing" © 2010 Lepadah All rights reserved Reproduction of any materials without permission is strictly prohibited. Copyright 1999-2010..
— Lepadah, May 10, 2010

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Country/Region: New York

Favorite Poets: Rumi, Gil Scott Heron, Felipe Luciano, Walt Whitman, Ginsberg, Kerouac, Neruda, Walker, Troupe, James Baldwin etc . . .list endless

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Arrow

16 years ago

Bursting electric blue,

indeed. One of the best things I've read here in a while. I don't know if you need the "sticky panties" given the last line. Either way, loved it. I do like your work.
Lepadah

Lepadah

16 years ago

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I'll take the compliment and the critique..."Sticky Panties." nasty. lol Also appreciate the read. Peace 1 lepadah