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May 10, 2010
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Let's divorce first ....How many made it to the list???????
Competition Code 053110
Let's divorce first
Men and women
Have been made equal,
But with a bit
Of size variations
That’s all...
So lead your man
Into the battle of love
Or be lead
That’s all one’s decision…
Come beloved before we marry
Let’s first finalise divorce
There should be no need
For voices to thereafter
To get really hoarse
Once pre- marriage -divorce is final
We may then marry of course
of that there should be
no doubt
as a matter of
Love, faith and intercourse course
— loved, May 10, 2010
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loved
16 years 2 months ago
as long as it is
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
Oh, so many ways I can take
loved
16 years 2 months ago
journey u say
loved
16 years 2 months ago
honey
shirley harrison
16 years 2 months ago
very very clever!
loved
16 years 2 months ago
fabulous you say
hobo
16 years 2 months ago
good laugh
loved
16 years 2 months ago
thanks for laughing
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
well done loved
loved
16 years 2 months ago
thanks
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
You're so funny sometimes
loved
16 years 2 months ago
thanks friend
loved
16 years 2 months ago
U SAY SO
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
Dearest Lovely
loved
16 years 2 months ago
humour
lyz
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Lovely
ziggy
16 years 2 months ago
hi
loved
16 years 2 months ago
light hearted yes
Mark
16 years 2 months ago
Good point Loved
loved
16 years 2 months ago
THANK YOU
Grassfield
16 years 2 months ago
Marriage
loved
16 years 2 months ago
sojourns taken alone
greeneyes
16 years 2 months ago
Loved, you are a marvel!
loved
16 years 2 months ago
THANKS AND
arja
16 years 2 months ago
LOL! :) gosh! I haven’t
loved
16 years 2 months ago
do ponder
mand
16 years 2 months ago
Have all your arguments
loved
16 years 2 months ago
thanks
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