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Let's divorce first ....How many made it to the list???????

Competition      Code 053110

 

Let's divorce first

 

Men and women

Have been made equal,

But with a bit

Of size variations

That’s all...

So lead your man

Into the battle of love

Or be lead

That’s all one’s decision…

 

Come beloved before we marry

Let’s first finalise divorce

There should be no need

For voices to thereafter

To get really hoarse

Once pre- marriage -divorce is final

We may then marry of course
of that there should be
no doubt
as a matter of

Love, faith and intercourse course

 




 

 

 

 

 

— loved, May 10, 2010

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loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

as long as it is

...funny tis good its for free need no money but shall acceptit if you would
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

Oh, so many ways I can take

Oh, so many ways I can take this poem. Thanks for the journey into each and every one. lol. ~A "If you think you're free, there's no escape possible." ~ Ram Dass
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

journey u say

.... this life is the loneliest sojourn ever taken by man even to the moon they go in company whenever they can....
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

honey

.... how do u know my name ? do u visit the site as i do the same yes the same the same
SH

shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

very very clever!

Fabulous poem loved! sad but very true in many cases! Much love! shirley harrison
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

fabulous you say

...thank u lady for making my day no more poems i shall compose just to preserve this loveliest day
hobo

hobo

16 years 1 month ago

good laugh

This gave me a good laugh, nice work
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks for laughing

... for last time i was caught laughing some one said are you not in the well in the well in the well I said yes now I will be....
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

i know that poets like u do smile when they mean to ur such a gracious poet urself keep smiling thats my only request to you
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

You're so funny sometimes

You always manage to keep us amused Loved...nice one. Rosina xena465
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks friend

thank you for not calling me a joker yet have a good day life must be funnny and love it must display have a good day a good day yet another good day
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

U SAY SO

....Then it must be good such thoughts must by all be well understood
L

lyz

16 years 1 month ago

Dearest Lovely

Yes, yes, yes. Humour and food for thought. Great write. I am smiling, you do entertain, thats for sure. Love Lyz. XX
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

humour

..is better than tumour we must appreciate in life only two things are a must one is a wife /hubby second is HUMOUR /SMILES FOR EVER LOVED ONCE BY ONE AND ALL NOW FOR EVER
L

lyz

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Lovely

LOL, I am still smiling. Thanks. XX
Z

ziggy

16 years 1 month ago

hi

hi funny one this good to read something looked at in a light hearted way ,,,,zigs
Mark

Mark

16 years 1 month ago

Good point Loved

Having been there two times I am of the camp why marry at all if a relationship is so meaningful? Nothing but a bunch of legalities so far as I have seen. Your poem is a cute idea imo ;) Pre nups are an expression of a lack of confidence it seems as well.. Well done poem ! Mark Resilient Flexibility RUN; when there seems to be no answer common sense will not speak, so run - -go running..
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

THANK YOU

..... EVER SO MUCH How kind of u but i can't even walk and u say run anyway thanks to u i'm glad u particpated in the fun
G

Grassfield

16 years 1 month ago

Marriage

A wonderful journey! Enjoyed the read!
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

sojourns taken alone

... are seldom satisfying one needs company good or bad we must modify ourselves and adjust or else the sojourn of life would prove to be hopeless IF not worthless LOVED ONCE BY ONE AND ALL
arja

arja

16 years 1 month ago

LOL! :) gosh! I haven’t

LOL! :) gosh! I haven't been married yet, but now this gets me thinking... and smiling of course...
loved

loved

16 years ago

do ponder

....for i have applied a life times experience in writing this poem
mand

mand

16 years ago

Have all your arguments

Have all your arguments first and then get married and live in peace, ha ha I like it. Divorce first, marriage latter, ingenius. Brilliant. Love Mand xxx
loved

loved

16 years ago

thanks

...ur a genius to say ingenius