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Summer Nights

As the night falls
I sit on my front porch
The cool summer breeze
Touches my face
As all of the little insects
Are singing their songs
And playing their games
I can hear the old white owl
Hooting from the top of the barn
My best friend Smokey
Is sound asleep
At my feet
Occasionally he twitches
I think he is chasing squirrels
In his dreams
I pull out my pipe
Let it hang from my lip
But I never put tobacco in it
I close my eyes
And let everything sing to my soul
While I take a journey
Back in my mind
To better times
To my glory days
When I was young
And full of energy
Where Saturday nights
Were what Saturday nights
Were meant to be
My little blue pickup
Best damn truck
I ever owned
You would straddle the gear shift
With your long skinny legs
They were hard as a rock
And smooth as silk
You had a tan
From head to toe
You loved your no tan lines
I have to admit
They sure looked good on you
We would drink a little beer
You would do a little weed
Then we would go skinny dipping
Up at Cowiche creek
We would make love
In the water
On the sand
In the back of my truck
Boy how we loved to
Well that’s enough about that
Back to our place
Where I was the king
Laughing at TV
Eating macaroni and cheese
You would put on something sexy
Dance just in the corner of my sight
Driving me insane
And loving every moment of it
We would kiss and giggle
And share our dreams
Then I would wrap you in my arms
You would lay on my chest
With never a thought of tomorrow
What a wonderful life
It really was

I love these summer evenings
They bring back those summer nights


I hope everyone likes this. it is the longest poem I have ever written
Hobo
— hobo, May 10, 2010

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shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

Randy by name Randy by nature!

You smooth talking lolly pop! yes well done its wonderful! Much love Hobo shirley harrison
hobo

hobo

16 years 1 month ago

ohhh I do love a good lollipop

Thank you my friend, I think randy by name randy by nature sums me up perfectly, and I love it hahaha Thank you Your Randy :)
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Hobo

I not only love it, but I can strongly relate to it! You've brought up some lovely memories of my own with this poem. Oh how I love those "glory days" To my glory days When I was young And full of energy Where Saturday nights Were what Saturday nights Were meant to be My little blue pickup Best damn truck I ever owned *sigh always, Cat
hobo

hobo

16 years 1 month ago

I am glad

I am glad it brought back some good memories, it did for me too :) thanks for your kind comments
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

excellent write Randy

a return visit well worth it. it brought back my youth for me too made me feel sad that one gets old and decrepit and too tired to get past ten o'clock on a saturday night. (Maybe not you yet, but definitely me) thanks for the memories love judy
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raj

16 years 1 month ago

Resonating

Hello Mr.Hobo... a very reflective rendition of inner thoughts taking centre stage and playing back some real life reels while you sit back and dwell in inner space...well done ..raj (sublime_ocean)...
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Awe shucks Hobo

What a beautiful picture you paint...even the sexy bits. I think this is pure heart and soul I enjoyed it very much. I almost wished those memories were mine. You lucky devil to have experienced such a lovely past. Rosina xena465
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Randy

This ones just lovely a slice of life in moments ... well done hun love and big hugs Jaycee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
loved

loved

16 years ago

its an honour

its an honour at times u visit my page u do me justice as u do even to insects i am one small one for you as an upcoming hopefully they say a trainee poet for you
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magics02

16 years ago

Lovely days of old

Great job Randy!! Really liked it and it made me think of alot of those olden golden days where we didn't have to worry about bills, etc. We just danced the night away got up to go to work and then dance again that nite, it was a fune when we were young, but dosen't mean we are still not young to go out and have that fun again..maybe not as limber:)) Good poetry a man that writes from his heart and soul. Loved every minute of it. And of course pet Smokey... Mona xoxox TIME well spent is TIME well lived