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ageless love

She wakes beside me every day
  and stumbles from our bed
  her hair all mussed, eyes full of sleep
  she's lovely as the day we wed

though many years have passed us now
  my hair has grown both scarce and white
  when I see her I still behold
  the girl I met one summer's night

And I still like to look at her
  she makes me laugh and smile
  when I tire and my bones ache
  for her I'll go on for a while

When oft' I gaze into bright eyes
  I still become quite lost
  why she's stayed through all this time
  no matter what the cost

And as the years pile up on me
  with her I'll live my life
  and always see the girl within
  my never aging wife




      TO:Susan on valentines
— scribbler, May 09, 2010

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Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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R.M.Shanmugam

16 years 1 month ago

i am spell bound at the

i am spell bound at the thought, rhyming and style. thanks shan
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scribbler

16 years 1 month ago

ageless

You know, that's how they used to always do it. thanks for kind words stan
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Wonderful

Lovely flow and sentiment...great work Scribbler. Rosina xena465
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hippiepoet69

16 years 1 month ago

Chills and then tears

I don't do stars. I hope this poem is Holly and me years down the road. I would say you and your wife are lucky. But luck did not keep you together all these years. Devotion to your love did. Take Care. huey
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scribbler

16 years 1 month ago

ageless

Staying in love does require some effort
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scribbler

16 years 1 month ago

endless

thank you for your continuing kind words.Perhaps you' critique PROGRESS?
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Just a few wee edits...

her hair all {mussed,}eyes full of sleep [needs a space] why{she”s}stayed through all this time …has two apostrophises [she’s] with her {I”ll}live my life [I'll] Rosina xena465
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scribbler

16 years 1 month ago

ageless

I'm a new hunt and peck typist. All my originals are in longhand and transferring via type is still new to me.however ,it's good to know that there's some one cares enough to point out mistakes thanks
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

You're welcome Scribbler

It's not always easy to know if someone wants help. Sometimes when we try to, we get told off. If only more people would ask, they would find there are loads of Neo members that would gladly help. I know I did when I first joined and I still do...need help. Rosina xena465
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ngaioBeck

16 years ago

Ageless

Tender and lovely. Wish I could do love poetry.
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scribbler

16 years ago

ageless

The lucky man is ME.Wrote poem to better half past valentines.Thanks and what changes and stanzas?"listen to all advice,then do what you want"